Added November 26, 2019 at 2:32pm by Housseynatou Diallo
Title: Wording change

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One upon a time, in the 90s where a black family lives in a small and unsafe neighbourhood. The mother has two young daughters Maggie and her sister Dee. They used to play together all the time, their mother loved to see them that way. The house was pretty and organized, Maggie and her sister Dee used to clean the house every morning. They had a maid who used to help them clean and cook. Their mother was the most thrilled person in the world, to the fact that she thought she the most two beautiful daughters ever and the two daughters that do not get envious of each other, in addition they always share their things to each other. Their mother always goes to buy new jewelry for them, however she buys different colors to test her daughters ‘ sisterhood. Maggie and Dee always prove their mother the way she wants to see them. The neighbourhood that the family were living in was not a safe environment. Mama always dreamed to live in safer one where she can her two daughters grow and be the most important people in the city. Unfortunately that could not happen because white people did not like to invite other people of color into their neighbourhood.

DMU Timestamp: November 21, 2019 20:25

Added November 26, 2019 at 2:35pm by Housseynatou Diallo
Title: Wording change

The text below is the previous wording for paragraph 2 (click to return there).

Their neighbor was not the best place for them because everyday they see how people in color being tortured and see their houses set on fire. All of their personal things get destroyed and they lose everything afterwards. One day Maggie’s family experiences the worse in their life since they live there. Some unkind people came to hurt a black family, because one member from the black family got into a fight. He was being discriminated in school and fought back. The white family went to get revenge. They set their house on fire. Mama went to help the family who were in need. Sadly the white people attacked them too because they were helping the other family. Melancholy, Maggie was in the living room and she was burned all over her arms and legs. Mama came home and found Maggie fainted in the room and she quickly took her to the hospital. Over months she injured healed but she still had scars all over her arms and legs. That’s how Maggie started to feel the most unattractive person in the world and feel so envious towards her sister. She thought that the word « no » is the world will never learn to say to her. She hallucinate that her mother loves her sister more. Their sisterhood was destroyed. Mama was disappointed to see her two daughters like that.

DMU Timestamp: November 21, 2019 20:25