Zahra A(May 12 2023 3:20AM):
I also agree with this. I think today people will consider to use this platform positively, like for example, selling their products as part of digital busine
Safira Ayu D(May 01 2023 10:48PM):
In my opinion, you can make a stronger argument by adding more data based on surveys or studies about how much the impact of scrolling TikTok to cell-phone screen time especially for students.
Rizki R(May 12 2023 3:12AM):
I think it's great that you guys bring a real example about some negative content that is being uploaded on tiktok. It was also viral a while ago.
Maulidya R(May 12 2023 6:12AM):
I agree with what Safira said. It will be better if you can find statistics about how long people spend in tiktok app to support the statement that tiktok can make their users have an excessive screen time.
Muhammad Andika S(May 12 2023 3:17AM):
: I agree with what Nanda said. I see a lot of educational content, I even found an account who give free lesson about tenses and grammar when they're doing a live channel.
narrraaa a(May 12 2023 3:21AM):
That's true. Some recommendations or suggestions can be pointed out here to make your reader more convinced to either stay in tiktok or leave tiktok after reading the negative impacts.
Fauziah nur m(May 12 2023 3:16AM):
The conclusion is summarized clearly. Maybe one thing to add it can be more interesting if you can give the reader some suggestions or recommendations about should they stay in tiktok or not, even after reading the disadvantages the app bring to people.
alyfia z(May 12 2023 3:07AM):
Maybe you
can elaborate why there is a violation
content in tiktok that brings to
vandalism eventhough tiktok has
made it clear that this is not allowed.
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