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I got so I could hear his name
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Jan 26
Jan 26
Kristin Beeman
Kristin Beeman
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I can see someone rummaging though letters. A heartbroken feel.
Jan 26
Jan 26
Kristin Beeman
Kristin Beeman
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The words are forceful, anger spills though once again.
Jan 26
Jan 26
Kristin Beeman
Kristin Beeman
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On a whole, the speaker of the poem seems to be in a relationship of some sort, (or doesn't want to be in one)!
Jan 26
Marissa Gray
Marissa Gray
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There is a lot of alliteration in this poem, especially at the beginning, suggesting that she is stressing ideas such as "soul" and "sensation" giving this poem an aura of abstraction and the intangible.
Jan 26
Kristin Beeman
Kristin Beeman
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The s words capitalized. "Stop", and "Soul" are very different choices. The speaker doesn't want to feel.
Jan 26
Kristin Beeman
Kristin Beeman
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Also capitalized. Thunder could mean lyrical thunder or internal.
just a Youngstown girl trying to find her way.
Jan 26
Georgia Kasamias
Georgia Kasamias
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This is a clever ending, as she not only employs the imagery of interrupting, but then goes ahead and ends on a dash. Maybe misery interrupted the poem? Lots of interpretations could be made.
just a Youngstown girl trying to find her way.
Jan 26
Rachel Davis
Rachel Davis
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It seems as though she is talking about salvation and religion because she even refers to an angel.. however her placement of the angel is confusing... not sure what it is an "Angel in the floor"
Jan 26
Rachel Davis
Rachel Davis
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even though you have life down to a science, you are going to fail, but God will have mercy and help you
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