Most recent public comments by Drew Warden https://nowcomment.com/users/108360 https://nowcomment.com/documents/40909?scroll_to=2499760 https://nowcomment.com/documents/40909?scroll_to=2499760 Primitive is a word commented a lot in this paragraph. I like the idea presented in the comments about drawing a direct opposite from the word modern in the sentence as a contrast. I would also use the root word of PRIME to focus my 5th graders that also use the same word in Math with Prime numbers. Connecting it as the original or origin of all numbers as the connection to primitive people being the original or origin of all people. Wed, 14 Jul 2021 16:15:20 -0400