Comments by Brittani Scott Most recent public comments by Brittani Scott https://nowcomment.com/users/10947 Mistake https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=287473 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=287473 I believe she was the writer. This was a narrative of herself. She mentioned the present looks of the home she once lived in as a memoir to the reader letting them know that this place had not changed a bit. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:46:02 -0500 Painted Picture https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=287472 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=287472 Maybe the writer once visited this place and wanted to paint the picture for the reader to get a glimpse of where Susan once lived with her mother. It seemed to me as a piece of evidence that her and her family actually lived there based on Susan's description. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:46:02 -0500 Description https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=287471 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=287471 This sentence builds on the previous paragraphs because the previous paragraphs let us know that she loved books and that even though her life was not a fairy tale and she did not have a mother that knew her role or should I say wanted to acknowledge her role. Susan began to let books take her away from the current world she was in. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:46:02 -0500 It is likely https://nowcomment.com/documents/25279?scroll_to=280463 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25279?scroll_to=280463 This phrase tells me that the reader is unsure of Sylvia being on an antidepressant. But stated in the paragraphs before, we were notified that she had taken multiple pills and based on the evidence given there was a great chance of her taking an antidepressant pill. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:53 -0500 Intro https://nowcomment.com/documents/25279?scroll_to=280462 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25279?scroll_to=280462 This conveys dramatic impact because its used as an introductory to that day she planned to kill herself. It opens up an image to the reader helping us to picture that day of February 11. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:53 -0500 Biographer's Language https://nowcomment.com/documents/25276?scroll_to=274884 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25276?scroll_to=274884 The biographer's language seems to me as being uncertain or unsure of what is being portrayed to us about Eva. The reviewer proves to us that the biographer's statement about Eva and Hitler can possibly be false or unclear in understanding. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:49 -0500 "It could be said" https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=268321 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=268321 The effect of the author using this sort of redundancy is to extend what he is trying to say. It is normally unnecessary for a writer to place this kind of beginning to a paragraph. Maybe this was some sort of way for the writer to make the reader see that Norman Mailer was seen to be one of the last Romantics. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:46:53 -0500 Elephantine and Mannered Prose https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=268320 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=268320 Elephantine prose being the use of large vocabulary and mannered prose being the way of speaking or writing in a precise or essential way. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:43 -0500 This paragraph establishes a sense of urgency for the reader to know that Norman Mailer was one of America's well-known writers. And multiple titles of his writings were given to prove that he was one of the best. I would have imagined the obituary https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=268300 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=268300 starting off with his beginning life, of where he was born and who he was before he became this great writer. Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:46:54 -0500 Mrs. Pankhurst turned into a stout supporter due the fact that; her and Lloyd George had differences when it came to women rights, he still asked her to organize a protest for employing women and other areas dealing with work around the time of the war. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=265302 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=265302 Tue, 22 Dec 2015 14:41:49 -0500 An example of nuance would be two paintings of the same image by two different artists. When the images are studied there will be nuance between both images. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=259372 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=259372 Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:38 -0500 There was a image drawn to the reader to show how courageous and strong Emmeline Pankhurst was. She was a woman who went against her normal doings to prove to the world that women had rights to vote. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=259370 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=259370 Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:38 -0500 The review begins with a quotation from Stanley Baldwin to give the reader a feel of the footprint to history, Mrs. Pankhurst left behind. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=259369 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25274?scroll_to=259369 Sat, 20 Feb 2016 08:45:43 -0500