Comments by Lily Vasquez-Echols Most recent public comments by Lily Vasquez-Echols https://nowcomment.com/users/112497 Evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642510 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642510 Because the EPA was scrapped means that they are still trying to work to find solutions and figure out more ideas. They haven't found a complete solution. Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:24:07 -0500 Evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642507 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642507 Shows that they are trying to come up with solutions and preventions, and could be evidence to them interesting and willing to hear more ideas. Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:22:10 -0500 Main reason https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642505 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642505 Main issue and shows that Romney cares about the topic and is well aware of it. Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:21:13 -0500 Evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642503 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642503 Starting locally can make a change Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:20:32 -0500 Who https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642502 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297453?scroll_to=2642502 This is who I am writing to in the letter. Gives evidence to that they care about the pollution issue in Utah Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:19:46 -0500 Repetition https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641385 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641385 repeats the word gives, show emphasis Thu, 18 Nov 2021 10:47:37 -0500 Choices https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641383 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641383 Chose the word "swatted" to show that to the girlfriends she was like a fly or a pest that they instantly rejected Thu, 18 Nov 2021 10:46:03 -0500 Repetition https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641379 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641379 The author repeats the word belong many times to show that belonging to something was very important to his mother. Thu, 18 Nov 2021 10:43:08 -0500 Choices https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2640689 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2640689 He makes the "No" its own sentences making it final and there is no other argument against it. Wed, 17 Nov 2021 16:43:17 -0500 Syntax & repetition https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2640674 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2640674 Made both sentences about them crying short. Repeating this makes the fact that they are crying is an issue or distracting to the situation Wed, 17 Nov 2021 16:40:08 -0500 Successful https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613622 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613622 The locals were successful and were able to do something about the excessive pollution Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:38:59 -0400 Multiple groups wanted to help https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613619 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613619 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:38:07 -0400 Evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613611 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613611 The locals saw the whole community was suffering from the pollution Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:36:26 -0400 Choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613605 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613605 The author chooses to add how Groves and Madison county didn't respond and shows guilt Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:35:17 -0400 Evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613603 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613603 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:34:33 -0400 Quote https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613601 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613601 This quote from one of the locals uses descriptions of how bad the pollution was by describing how it affected the people living there. Makes the readers understand why the locals wanted the operations to stop. Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:34:02 -0400 Choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613597 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613597 The author uses the word "flowed" to convey the image of the inboxes getting so many complaints and it wasn't only a couple of locals upset. Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:32:53 -0400 Significance https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613589 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613589 The main point of the article is that there was enough of the population who were opposed to the industrial practices that the state made a law banning controversial practices such as the wood burning. Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:31:21 -0400 Why https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613580 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294218?scroll_to=2613580 The locals in the area were opposed to the operations from the beginning. Fri, 29 Oct 2021 13:29:53 -0400 Choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610326 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610326 He chooses to use awkward instead of a word we would think someone use like upsetting, it just gives light that he grew up feeling out of place and he felt confused being mixed. Tue, 26 Oct 2021 14:49:57 -0400 Choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610310 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610310 Author chooses to use comparison here. He wants to emphasize that the Bible was his entertainment like how an action movie is other peoples entertainment Tue, 26 Oct 2021 14:39:32 -0400 Choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610307 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610307 The author chooses to say bitterness, because it wasn't to the point of anger/violence but it was resentment that was festering. Tue, 26 Oct 2021 14:35:50 -0400 Syntax https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610105 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610105 The author chooses to make this sentence short, this breaks up the rhythm in the reading and emphasizes the important characteristic that the Zulu man is proud Tue, 26 Oct 2021 11:31:06 -0400 Uses of senses https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610064 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610064 She chooses to add the details about the vanilla frosting in order to appeal to the reader's senses, this makes the reading more interesting and a detail most people wouldn't typically add, but it adds more to the story. Tue, 26 Oct 2021 11:12:38 -0400 Major https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584368 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584368 This is important because he taught himself how to write which many slaves didn't know how to do. Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:25 -0400 Major https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584346 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584346 This is important because he taught himself how to write which many slaves didn't know how to do. Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:03:47 -0400 the doubted he was educated and could write https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584367 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584367 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:24 -0400 the doubted he was educated and could write https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584345 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584345 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:02:52 -0400 Wait https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584342 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584342 He felt like he had to wait and prepare for the day he was ready to run away Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:01:45 -0400 Wait https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584366 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584366 He felt like he had to wait and prepare for the day he was ready to run away Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:24 -0400 logos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584322 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584322 If a slave runs away there is a risk of them being killed, appeals to your logical side that this would happen Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:56:24 -0400 logos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584365 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584365 If a slave runs away there is a risk of them being killed, appeals to your logical side that this would happen Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:24 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584321 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584321 Reading this makes you feel empathy and compassion for this man Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:55:26 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584364 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584364 Reading this makes you feel empathy and compassion for this man Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 Describing how the idea of freedom was all around him and he couldn't ignore it https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584363 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584363 he was emersed in the idea of freedom Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 Describing how the idea of freedom was all around him and he couldn't ignore it https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584320 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584320 he was emersed in the idea of freedom Tue, 05 Oct 2021 15:04:52 -0400 He had to do something about it, it was haunting him https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584317 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584317 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:53:30 -0400 He had to do something about it, it was haunting him https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584362 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584362 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 He has seen the horrible things and he wishes he didn't know about it https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584361 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584361 He wishes he could go back to when he didn't know about the terrible thing slavery is and wishes he could go back to being ignorant like the other slaves who weren't allowed education Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 He has seen the horrible things and he wishes he didn't know about it https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584315 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584315 He wishes he could go back to when he didn't know about the terrible thing slavery is and wishes he could go back to being ignorant like the other slaves who weren't allowed education Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:53:07 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584298 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584298 starting to despise the people who enslave him, which was a more painful and strong feeling he had than his relief Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:51:17 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584360 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584360 starting to despise the people who enslave him, which was a more painful and strong feeling he had than his relief Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 Making the point that slaves can be smart as well and have good reasons to be emancipated https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584359 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584359 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 Making the point that slaves can be smart as well and have good reasons to be emancipated https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584291 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584291 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 15:07:37 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584255 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584255 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:45:15 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584358 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584358 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:23 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584253 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584253 He is caring about the emotions of the boys who helped him, he is grateful but he knows they, right be embarrassed from helping him. Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:43:57 -0400 ethos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584357 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584357 He is caring about the emotions of the boys who helped him, he is grateful but he knows they, right be embarrassed from helping him. Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 telling us how he learned how to read and how he educated himself https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584356 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584356 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 telling us how he learned how to read and how he educated himself https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584251 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584251 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:42:42 -0400 evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584355 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584355 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584249 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584249 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:41:14 -0400 claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584248 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584248 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:41:03 -0400 claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584354 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584354 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 She became more like her husband https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584246 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584246 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:39:57 -0400 She became more like her husband https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584353 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584353 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 Use descriptive words and a sad tone https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584244 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584244 Tone shift from a nice tone(She was nice) to a sad one (she became not nice). Uses imagery of the heart becoming stone and simile "tiger-like" to show how slavery negatively affected her as a slaveholder Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:38:24 -0400 Use descriptive words and a sad tone https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584352 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584352 Tone shift from a nice tone(She was nice) to a sad one (she became not nice). Uses imagery of the heart becoming stone and simile "tiger-like" to show how slavery negatively affected her as a slaveholder Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 reasoning https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584351 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584351 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:22 -0400 reasoning https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584241 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584241 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:34:08 -0400 evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584350 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584350 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:21 -0400 evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584240 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584240 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:33:39 -0400 claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584349 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584349 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:21 -0400 claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584236 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584236 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:31:50 -0400 pathos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584348 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584348 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:21 -0400 pathos https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584235 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584235 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:31:35 -0400 The author is describing instead of telling how his instructor would shut him up "in mental darkness" https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584347 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290810?scroll_to=2584347 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 23:04:21 -0400 The author is describing instead of telling how his instructor would shut him up "in mental darkness" https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584183 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2584183 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:27:32 -0400