Comments by Sadie DuBois Most recent public comments by Sadie DuBois https://nowcomment.com/users/112666 Christoph presented as an honest, passionate scientist who feels that what Hopkins put Henrietta and her family through was wrong https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737472 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737472 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 10:07:02 -0600 Contrast between Zakariyya's silence/minimal reactions and Deborah's excitement and awe https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737459 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737459 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 10:04:19 -0600 From this point on, Skloot's tone becomes more narrative and she focuses more on Deborah and Zakariyya's feelings than her own. https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737453 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737453 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 10:03:03 -0600 I agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706555 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706555 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 09:48:55 -0600 Henrietta is clearly in a lot of pain, and Skloot probably doesn't want to dramatize her death too much. https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706549 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706549 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 09:48:05 -0600 Skloot probably wanted to focus more on what Henrietta was like while she was living to demonstrate how full of life and loved she was, rather than how she appeared on her deathbed. It is also likely a matter of privacy. https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706541 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706541 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 13:26:20 -0600 Exhausted from all the whole ordeal https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701629 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701629 Wed, 02 Feb 2022 15:04:01 -0600 Most people seemed to care more about the cells and ignore that Henrietta was a real person- her family probably doesn't like this https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701625 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701625 Wed, 02 Feb 2022 15:02:51 -0600 Deborah has suffered both physically and mentally from people prying about Henrietta, so she likely doesn't want to deal with inquiries like this ever again https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701612 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701612 Wed, 02 Feb 2022 15:01:16 -0600 Indicates that Henrietta's family have faced a lot of hardships related to her cells so they probably assume that Skloot was going to cause more problems https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701593 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701593 Thu, 03 Feb 2022 13:13:27 -0600 This is the problem https://nowcomment.com/documents/297615?scroll_to=2643579 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297615?scroll_to=2643579 Sun, 21 Nov 2021 21:32:04 -0600 My letter is about the wage gap in Utah, so I addressed it to the governor https://nowcomment.com/documents/297615?scroll_to=2643578 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297615?scroll_to=2643578 This issue resonates with me personally, since I am a women living in Utah. Sun, 21 Nov 2021 21:35:50 -0600 Partial solution offered https://nowcomment.com/documents/297615?scroll_to=2643577 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297615?scroll_to=2643577 Sun, 21 Nov 2021 21:30:11 -0600 Uses sensory details to illustrate the racial divide that Trevor can now see in his society https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641673 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641673 Thu, 18 Nov 2021 13:05:22 -0600 Use of dialogue here creates a lighter, less formal tone even though he is describing a serious incident https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641669 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2641669 Thu, 18 Nov 2021 12:59:50 -0600 Overview https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613775 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613775 -Presents problem clearly and cites possible solution -Author uses many stats, personal accounts, and examples as evidence -Addresses possible issues that could be encountered with this solution Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:44:43 -0500 Another personal experience of a resident https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613771 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613771 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:42:36 -0500 Addresses another possible issue https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613768 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613768 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:41:11 -0500 Personal experience of a resident https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613764 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613764 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:39:32 -0500 Addresses possible issue: city must negotiate with residents, explains that residents usually do not have to move too far https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613762 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613762 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:38:34 -0500 Another example of an building with issues + solutions the city implemented to make it more sustainable https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613751 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613751 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:35:34 -0500 Some opposing evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613749 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613749 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:34:18 -0500 Example of problem in Paris and the method the city used to fix it https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613745 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613745 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:33:09 -0500 Personal example for city leader used as evidence https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613743 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613743 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 14:32:37 -0500 Solution- NYC could look at Paris' example https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613657 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613657 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 12:47:16 -0500 Another smaller issue https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613653 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613653 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 12:46:27 -0500 Offers a possible solution in the form of the government's plan to improve the sustainability of NYC buildings https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613644 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613644 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 12:45:24 -0500 Presents an issue, and explains why it is an issue https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613623 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294222?scroll_to=2613623 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 12:41:43 -0500 Tone shift represents a turning point in her life where she stops telling lies https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610076 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610076 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 10:14:13 -0500 Use of imagery (figurative language) here illustrates just how outrageous the speaker's lies are https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610056 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610056 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 10:12:23 -0500 Describing what influenced him by citing a book relating to Catholicism may be a method of appealing to Catholics https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2600142 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2600142 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 10:12:23 -0500 Use of similes to compare her changes in disposition as a result of slavery https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586546 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586546 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 10:12:23 -0500