Comments by Alex Yannelli Most recent public comments by Alex Yannelli https://nowcomment.com/users/112670 this is a good quote https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771286 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771286 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:29:33 -0400 people don't have to be kicked off their land for "conservation" purposes, they can remain while being sustainable https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771285 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771285 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:29:22 -0400 the polycultures enrich the soil, instead of exhausting and eroding it like current monocultures https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771284 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771284 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:27:25 -0400 very selective burning of forests, instead of cutting everything down, and then planting crops under still heavy growth https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771283 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771283 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:26:36 -0400 agroforestry - "growing a wide variety of food crops while keeping trees and forests standing" https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771280 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771280 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:24:53 -0400 looking at deforested areas and seeing these non-natural earthworks https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771277 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771277 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:23:23 -0400 they didn't have monocultures, they cultivated their plants alongside those of the forest and palms (not sure what the palms are for) https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771273 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771273 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:20:32 -0400 millions of people used to live sustainably from the forest - can be seen from the geoglyphs https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771271 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310881?scroll_to=2771271 Tue, 05 Apr 2022 20:19:27 -0400 this section is somewhat confusing... --> local communities take advantage of other resources while land is restored? they are important to get involved because they are the closest communities to the rainforest, they are important for upkeep and their https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763210 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763210 well-being is in question here Mon, 28 Mar 2022 21:31:54 -0400 becoming cleaner is important for international business because the sector could not invest in Brazil because of fear of climate implications (other people see them as unclean) https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763206 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763206 Mon, 28 Mar 2022 21:27:28 -0400 Brazil is huge on agriculture, restoring already degraded pastures could increase meat production, lead to increase in $$ from agriculture, and more in tax revenue https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763205 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763205 Mon, 28 Mar 2022 21:24:19 -0400 disappointing action by president (like stated in another article), need to get administration on board with ending illegal deforestation on much greater lengths than they currently are https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763203 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763203 Mon, 28 Mar 2022 21:21:53 -0400 70% of emissions comes from agriculture, deforestation and fires - stopping deforestation also helps Brazil become a lower emissions country https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763202 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2763202 Mon, 28 Mar 2022 21:19:38 -0400 One solution: keep current legal/illegal deforestation laws, enforce illegal deforestation practices https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757492 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757492 Wed, 23 Mar 2022 02:06:21 -0400 most of the Amazon is in Brazil, they are crucial for saving the rainforest https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757489 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757489 Wed, 23 Mar 2022 01:59:21 -0400 this link could be something interesting to check out - something fishy is going on in Brazil, they are encouraging illegal practices, this is similar to the president saying he is going to stop deforestation and then encouraging it https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757486 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757486 Wed, 23 Mar 2022 01:54:47 -0400 the four reasons that follow this sentence are the reasons that the Amazon rainforest is important and why it must be protected - for climate, biodiversity, global climate impact on agriculture, and economic impact https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757483 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757483 Wed, 23 Mar 2022 01:48:18 -0400 this restates some of the importance of the rainforest - this is visited more in the other articles but it can affect weather/rain patterns that affect agriculture as well as it being one of the most biodiverse regions in the world https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757481 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310166?scroll_to=2757481 Wed, 23 Mar 2022 01:46:06 -0400 without it, we would lose a huge amount of animals and history contained in the animals/plants there https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741845 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741845 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:57:20 -0500 ending climate change might not be possible without the Amazon rainforest taking in all of the carbon dioxide that it does https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741842 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741842 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:56:44 -0500 environmental impact - change rainfall patterns around the world https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741841 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741841 this is pretty close to a direct quote, so be careful when using this info, if you do Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:55:31 -0500 shift the climate to be more arid (less rain) which would destroy agriculture https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741840 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741840 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:53:41 -0500 economic impact - would destroy an entire ecosystem which effects local economies https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741839 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741839 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:53:41 -0500 increase in fires from people setting them to clear Amazon trees for industries stated above https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741838 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741838 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:51:43 -0500 this is how the rainforests are mainly being cleared https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741837 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741837 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:49:45 -0500 this is the amount those industries impact Brazil, https://tradingeconomics.com/brazil/gdp says that Brazil's GDP is 1444 billion, so not even 1% of GDP https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741836 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741836 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:49:15 -0500 gives reasons for why it is disappearing - clearing away of trees for farming, mining, and oil https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741834 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741834 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:47:57 -0500 interesting point about why it can't be destroyed - it is the most biodiverse region in the world with more to still discover https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741831 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308132?scroll_to=2741831 Thu, 10 Mar 2022 23:45:17 -0500 last section shows the distrust of the Lacks' by their quick change of mood and them not knowing who to trust - emotional appeal again? https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737498 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737498 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:15:37 -0500 lists a variety of examples of 'blurring the lines between reality and sci-fi --> again to appeal to reader's emotion and get them on Deborah's side https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737494 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737494 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:14:44 -0500 mentions what other info was in the article to show that Deborah was uninformed - appeals to reader's emotion https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737490 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:13:37 -0500 Deborah doesn't even know basic info about her mom and sister - Skloot puts in to get the reader to be on the emotional side of the Lacks' https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737487 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737487 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:12:09 -0500 "might" - maybe; researcher feels bad for the Lackes but only after Skloot informs him of the family's situation https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737484 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737484 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:11:05 -0500 mentions this quote to show the psychological toll that this whole situation has played on Deborah https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737470 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737470 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:06:46 -0500 capitalization of key words to put emphasis on money, contract, and mom https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737466 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737466 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:05:43 -0500 short sentence - no need for interpretation, very blunt to show strong feelings of not wanting to talk to Skloot https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737462 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737462 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:04:52 -0500 the title is a play on the rest of the chapter - Deborah thinks that crazy sci-fi things can be done with her mom's cells, shows her lack of knowledge of the subject (and lack of info she was told) https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737451 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262545?scroll_to=2737451 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 11:00:51 -0500 or the president is untrustworthy https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735456 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735456 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 deforestation could be international problem - Brazil is committed even if the data doesn't necessarily support it, international markets implicated https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735454 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735454 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 interesting graph - deforestation seems to have gone down after 2006 but is now on the way back up, could look into what was being done in this time frame, could be potential solution https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735452 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735452 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 and paragraph 10 too https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735449 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735449 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 paragraph 8 and 9 give short reasons why amazon deforestation is important (1- huge biodiverse ecosystem, 2- creates a huge amount of oxygen and gets rid of carbon dioxide) https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735448 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735448 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 these first two sentences could be good for general statistics on the rate of deforestation https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735446 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735446 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 interesting point to say that nothing is really being done currently to stop deforestation --> Brazil says they are going to stop it but deforestation increased the most last year https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735445 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307469?scroll_to=2735445 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 18:28:43 -0500 it also gives the chapter a somber tone https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706552 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706552 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 10:48:38 -0500 this is a really good idea https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706539 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706539 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 10:46:07 -0500 brevity of death scene could be a parallel to how not many people were there with her when she died, and that people quickly moved on from her death because of her cells https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706526 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706526 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 10:44:46 -0500 possibly describing just Henrietta's pain to make the reader remember that Henrietta was still a person with emotions, feelings --> connects reader to Henrietta on an emotional level https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706518 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2706518 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 10:48:38 -0500 Overall, I think that the area is very grey for if they had the right to take samples. I could definitely see it argued that taking samples was "an operative procedure.. deemed necessary in proper surgical care". https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701638 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701638 However, because of the lack of clarity of the title and consent form, as well as the history of taking samples from people for free without consent, it seems more realistic that they didn't have the right consent. Thu, 03 Feb 2022 14:20:25 -0500 what was this other form that she signed? was it another consent form? this could be important in determining if the doctors had the right to take tissue samples https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701634 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701634 Wed, 02 Feb 2022 16:05:43 -0500 consent waiver titled "Operation Permit" which implies it only applies to operations at the hospital https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701630 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701630 Wed, 02 Feb 2022 16:04:22 -0500 collecting samples from every person, consent not mentioned https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701627 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701627 Wed, 02 Feb 2022 16:03:21 -0500 used patients' medical records and biopsies without their knowledge - didn't think consent was necessary because they were providing free treatment, now would the whole study be invalidated? https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701623 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2701623 Thu, 03 Feb 2022 14:13:41 -0500 use of the word "tucked" like 'tucked-in' which is used to describe littler kids to mimic the lack of change of tastes from when he was a child https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645305 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645305 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 02:08:27 -0500 connection to earlier chapters with Church reference - comedic and helps reader feel familiar with the setting https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645304 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645304 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 02:04:24 -0500 possible connection to earlier? - states he is a mix of his mother and father then gives subtle example why - like Trevor never thought he was above his cousins because of his light skin, Trevor's dad also doesn't think he has "moral superiority" https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645302 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645302 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 02:02:02 -0500 repeated use of "I know" in proceeding phrases to list out what he does know about his dad, then ends the paragraph with a short sentence that has nice rhythm to read but also that doubles as a way to say that he doesn't really know a lot about his dad https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645301 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645301 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:59:36 -0500 italicized words "my" and "a" to draw attention to possession in order to connect the story to Trevor's relationships later on in life https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645300 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645300 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:52:33 -0500 comparison of animal abuse to racial injustice https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645298 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645298 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:41:06 -0500 connection back to when Trevor used to get his cousins in trouble and not suffer the consequences - could be hinting at his racial identity having something to do with this even though this section isn't necessarily about race https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645297 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645297 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:38:47 -0500 use of "tactics" again reinforces the good vs. evil constant battle metaphor https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645281 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645281 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:27:33 -0500 this and the example after show one of the clashes between "evil mastermind" and "vengeful cop" - they reinforce the simile with words like "on my side" and the story itself sharing characteristics to the simile situation https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645280 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645280 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:26:04 -0500 simile - comparison between mother and his relationship and a cop and evil mastermind; (respected each other but working against each other) https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645265 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645265 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:23:45 -0500 Trevor Noah uses dialogue sections all throughout his explanations to draw the reader in - makes the reading more exciting, familiarizes the reader with personality types of characters, and brings attention to certain points in the text https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645264 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645264 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:18:27 -0500 connection to beginning of chapter where Trevor states his mom was forgotten as a child - now she has meaning through relationship with her son https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645249 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645249 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:08:42 -0500 almost comedic comparison between how poor she was and how important English was - English was seemingly more important that basic necessities https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645248 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645248 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 01:04:08 -0500 repeated use of "didn't belong" to show that she didn't feel welcome throughout many of her identities growing up https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645247 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645247 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 00:59:44 -0500 connection to earlier chapter about going to different churches https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645246 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645246 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 00:53:15 -0500 another funny metaphor to show how different and attention-drawing trevor's race was in the area he grew up https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645223 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645223 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 00:06:15 -0500 humorous statement - connects the reader to Trevor's thinking when he was a child to better understand his identity crisis (he doesn't think he is superior and feels bad for others, he takes advantage of his treatment for his own personal gain) https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645206 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645206 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 00:02:17 -0500 climate change and land preservation bills https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642567 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642567 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:41:41 -0500 statistical evidence to explain why modern solutions like snow blowing aren't going to work long-term https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642565 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642565 climate change has left Utah and other states in a drought, water used to make artificial snow not available, need fast action and supporting new ideas/bills to solve problem Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:40:13 -0500 this piece of evidence is going to be directly used to show what is happening to skiing because of climate change https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642560 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642560 higher temperatures -> fewer cold days -> precipitation comes as rain rather than snow -> less snow, not as good skiing; and that there is direct research supporting this Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:38:40 -0500 Both of these pieces of evidence are going to be used to explain the impact of climate change on Utah skiing and that some solutions (snow making) aren't long-term options; the letter is going to be asking Mike Lee to support more climate change bills https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642554 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297467?scroll_to=2642554 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 13:41:41 -0500 much easier to read https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613047 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613047 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 03:01:10 -0400 use dialogue sections to break up denser paragraph sections https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613046 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613046 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 03:01:10 -0400 joking metaphor/fake scenario to show how much his mother was hardcore https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613045 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613045 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:56:28 -0400 connection to warring tribes described earlier in the chapter https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613044 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613044 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:55:17 -0400 interesting use of "shades" to describe a variety of different meanings - another possible hint at race being a major point of discussion? https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613029 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613029 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:49:59 -0400 even titles like "black church", "white church" and "mixed church" reinforce the story's connection to race https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613027 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613027 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:43:42 -0400 hints at conflicts of identity with Church analogy - balancing of multiple racial identities https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613026 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613026 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:43:42 -0400 short little jokes like "So let's give this Jesus thing a shot" in the last paragraph and about Christianity make the passages intriguing to read, show that Trevor Noah is funny https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613022 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613022 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:39:02 -0400 exciting hook - makes reader want to know details of getting thrown out of a car https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613021 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613021 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 02:35:29 -0400 comparison to other "solution" methods, but doesn't really give if one or the other is better, just states that they are different https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613015 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613015 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:58:04 -0400 addresses some of the challenges of getting their data https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613014 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613014 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:53:49 -0400 appeals to people's emotions by commenting that their research will help people survive and thrive, not just help the scientific community https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613013 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613013 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:52:27 -0400 talks about specific methods of how they are going to accomplish their goal - more realistic goals https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613012 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613012 also visits this in the next paragraph (24) Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:51:10 -0400 compares solution to a similar one that is well-known and being headed by coral scientists - showing that 100 Island Challenge solution is of the same caliber/credible https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613010 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613010 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:48:12 -0400 restating the solution with a little more specific detail; quoted from an oceanography teacher (or something of the sort) to show credibility of the mission https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613008 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613008 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:45:54 -0400 paragraphs 13 and 14 introduce the solution to the issue - by gathering large amounts of data, the researchers hope they can help prepare for disastrous conditions in the future https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613005 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613005 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:43:10 -0400 addresses severity of the issue again - "hope that not all reefs are going to be dead in 10 to 20 years", this thought process is "in the minority" https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613003 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:39:12 -0400 Entire first paragraph introduces the problem - effectively communicates that a variety of different issues are impacting coral reefs https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613002 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2613002 use of "devastated" and "worldwide" show the severity and how widespread the issue is Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:37:28 -0400 links to another article dedicated to on giving statistics on coral bleaching - establishes credibility with facts https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2612998 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294132?scroll_to=2612998 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:33:50 -0400 false confidence metaphor - she was given attention ("throne") but it didn't really mean anything (shown in "alcazar"/fortress, prisoner to her false identity she had created) https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610083 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610083 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 11:16:59 -0400 support of claim by showing that slaves have the ability to overcome challenges and do amazing things even while being "handicapped" at the start of the race - ex: compared his journey to writing against master Thomas' https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586749 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586749 Mon, 04 Oct 2021 02:19:44 -0400 play on the reader's emotions - descriptive language such as "agony" and "writhing" and "envied for stupidity" to show that slaves' situation was far worse than it seemed on the surface https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586748 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586748 Mon, 04 Oct 2021 02:17:03 -0400 caricatures slave owners to make them seem pitiful and thoughtless https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586747 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586747 Mon, 04 Oct 2021 02:14:43 -0400 similar to support used earlier - Irishmen think a Douglas is still an intelligent human like mistress and boys on the street thought Douglas was worthy of freedom and education (intelligent human) https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586746 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586746 Mon, 04 Oct 2021 02:11:24 -0400 more support for claim - shows that slaves can have intelligent thought process and conversations https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586745 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586745 Mon, 04 Oct 2021 02:09:11 -0400 repeating support for his claim that slaves are regular people with his experience with the white kids on street - they treat him as a regular person and are sympathetic instead of embarrassed to be seen with him and vicious https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586744 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2586744 support 1: mistress teaching him how to write support 2: kids wanted him to be free Mon, 04 Oct 2021 02:07:58 -0400