Comments by Lilyana Lopez Most recent public comments by Lilyana Lopez https://nowcomment.com/users/112707 The Author was trying to portray a strong message of how one isn't what they are on the outside in the inside, relating it to her cancer but through an innocent sense. https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737669 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737669 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:36:53 -0500 Not only here but throughout the chapter, the use of repetition of the word "really." https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737652 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737652 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:31:26 -0500 This is an example to really easily put it into perspective, simple to understand yet powerful. Really shows the patterns of systematic prejudices. https://nowcomment.com/documents/307088?scroll_to=2735318 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307088?scroll_to=2735318 Fri, 04 Mar 2022 08:55:37 -0500 I agree, event those residing in a higher class neighborhood have those disadvantages of sheltering setbacks and lack of exposure. https://nowcomment.com/documents/307088?scroll_to=2735314 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307088?scroll_to=2735314 Fri, 04 Mar 2022 08:55:37 -0500 This is exactly the kind of thinking that evoked me to do this project of the question I chose. I think of neighborhoods and surrounding atmospheres as development and this will support my claims on exposure. https://nowcomment.com/documents/307088?scroll_to=2735313 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307088?scroll_to=2735313 Fri, 04 Mar 2022 08:55:37 -0500 She allows the readers to develop an opinion for themselves before throwing out heres. This creates a sense of imagination and keeps the readers intrigued throughout the description. If she wasn't as direct this would be more of a biased approach. https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2707187 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2707187 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 15:05:33 -0500 This is likely why they were so hesitant in trusting the process and explains their uneasy feelings towards trusting and embracing the researcher. https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2702459 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2702459 Thu, 03 Feb 2022 14:13:27 -0500 It's good that they included a summary of a majority agreeing but I think they could have better anticipated questions and concerns of the opposing side to debunk in order for a more efficient sweep. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613738 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613738 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:31:23 -0400 However, other than this powerful statement, I feel that I would be very confused if I didn't have background knowledge on Gerrymandering. They could have done better at really introducing the issue and its relation to Michigan. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613724 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613724 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:28:54 -0400 "Voters should chose their politicians, not the other way around" is a very powerful statement. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613717 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613717 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:28:54 -0400 This is an important inclusion because it gives us context on these people so we have a reason to trust them, not blindly following an unknown leader. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613714 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613714 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:26:34 -0400 This is providing a direct proposal in order to demand change, very effective way of appeal. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613710 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613710 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:25:08 -0400 I find it encouraging how optimistic they are and I think this optimism helps them to achieve their goal better, mind over matter until it happens. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613708 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294237?scroll_to=2613708 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:24:25 -0400 I love how she takes a moment and draws us away from her main story to allow some imagery and descriptive wording to seep in and further intrigue the readers. https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610338 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610338 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 14:57:00 -0400 Ignorance https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610328 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2610328 This comment is ignorant and I find it very powerful. It shows a perfect example of a closed mindset. Tue, 24 May 2022 13:24:15 -0400 Strong Conclusion Indeed https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588876 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588876 The conclusion was very strong as it was supported by descriptive words such as how they 'most narrowly watched.' Tue, 05 Oct 2021 15:04:43 -0400 In Depth Sentence https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2587747 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2587747 Appeals to pathos as we see his attempts to relate the claim through pity and sadness. Tue, 05 Oct 2021 15:05:13 -0400