Comments by Zoe Murphy Most recent public comments by Zoe Murphy https://nowcomment.com/users/112726 Good evidence for my argument https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762484 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762484 Sun, 27 Mar 2022 21:25:45 -0400 Something I need to look into, need to see the benefits https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762481 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762481 Sun, 27 Mar 2022 21:25:06 -0400 Similar to an MPA almost https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762480 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762480 Sun, 27 Mar 2022 21:24:42 -0400 Really interesting piece of information that I want to involve in my essay https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762479 https://nowcomment.com/documents/310746?scroll_to=2762479 Sun, 27 Mar 2022 21:24:14 -0400 Kind of sums up a lot of things in the article https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754372 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754372 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:24:08 -0400 Good Stats https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754369 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754369 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:22:07 -0400 A good contradictory point https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754368 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754368 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:21:37 -0400 The next sections have good benefits of MPAs https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754364 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754364 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:20:28 -0400 The next three sections of the article explain different levels/types of MPAs https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754355 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754355 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:16:54 -0400 First sentence is a good basic definition https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754351 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754351 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:16:05 -0400 Good quote to use https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754348 https://nowcomment.com/documents/309750?scroll_to=2754348 Sun, 20 Mar 2022 23:15:25 -0400 Possible answer to issue https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742465 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742465 Fri, 11 Mar 2022 15:46:32 -0500 Really important piece of information to mention https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742464 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742464 Fri, 11 Mar 2022 15:45:24 -0500 Good statistic https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742463 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742463 Fri, 11 Mar 2022 15:44:22 -0500 Adding to the overfishing issue https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742462 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742462 Fri, 11 Mar 2022 15:43:44 -0500 Good definition to use https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742461 https://nowcomment.com/documents/308175?scroll_to=2742461 Fri, 11 Mar 2022 15:42:57 -0500 Kind of symbolism for what happens later in the chapter https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737682 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737682 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:47:42 -0500 The way she worded this sentence made us realize what happened. https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737662 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737662 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:34:14 -0500 The author just listed off tragedy after tragedy. She just kept emphasizing that people were dying in Deborah's life, even though we got the point she just kept going. https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737651 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737651 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:31:08 -0500 All of the author's inner thoughts are italicized. It doesn't really change the meaning of the book, but it changes HOW you read it. https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737638 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737638 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:28:52 -0500 Another good idea to bring up as a solution https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733097 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733097 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:58:14 -0500 Good solution https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733094 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733094 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:56:06 -0500 Good contradictory point https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733093 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733093 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:55:56 -0500 Good fact https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733090 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733090 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:54:08 -0500 Elasmobranchs is a good word to know https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733085 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733085 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:50:45 -0500 Again, good background info https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733081 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733081 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:48:47 -0500 Important fact to use in intro https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733076 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733076 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:46:28 -0500 Good background https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733073 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733073 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:45:57 -0500 Important piece of information showing how sharks are more vulnerable to overfishing https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733070 https://nowcomment.com/documents/307086?scroll_to=2733070 Wed, 02 Mar 2022 13:42:10 -0500 Question 1 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2707196 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2707196 I think it's really interesting how people don't know that much about Turner Station and they don't know anything about Henrietta. I think it highlights just how difficult it was to get this story out. I think it also gives a decent idea on Henrietta's life, she was part of a slow (kind of struggling) town, not a big bustling city with opportunities everywhere. Tue, 08 Feb 2022 14:29:09 -0500 Question 3: In the past, Henrietta had some health issues, and she more often than not refused treatment. I think Henrietta would've refused to have her cells used for research, so it's not ethical at all. Doctors didn't even ask if they could do this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2702471 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2702471 Thu, 03 Feb 2022 14:18:18 -0500 I feel like this is a really good opening sentence. It draws the reader in. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645190 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645190 Mon, 22 Nov 2021 23:05:19 -0500 Crazy story, especially since it was during Apartheid. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645189 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645189 Mon, 22 Nov 2021 23:04:37 -0500 Impactful to the readers to see how he was seen to others in South Africa https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645188 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645188 Mon, 22 Nov 2021 23:02:15 -0500 Interesting to put the other language in this paragraph. Made it seem more genuine in my opinion. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645178 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645178 Mon, 22 Nov 2021 22:41:03 -0500 I like the use of "woo-hoo!" and "zoom!" It really adds to the scene. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645177 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645177 Mon, 22 Nov 2021 22:33:38 -0500 I love this description, I can really imagine what's going on. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645175 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645175 Mon, 22 Nov 2021 22:21:37 -0500 Basically just talking about how Spencer Cox needs us (different states) to work together to combat climate change. https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642738 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642738 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 22:17:35 -0500 Interesting choice of words https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642737 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642737 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 22:16:33 -0500 I want to push Cox to look at the sacrifices we could make. https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642648 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642648 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 15:49:28 -0500 I'll mention this in my letter, just to give examples of climate changes going on in the Western United States. https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642646 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642646 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 15:46:49 -0500 Something I thought was interesting because I didn't even know he did that. https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642645 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297490?scroll_to=2642645 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 15:45:56 -0500 Credible company also working with drones. Gives you an idea that this drone idea is pretty valid. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613759 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613759 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:37:04 -0400 Very credible person saying this, the senior director of WWF. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613754 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613754 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:36:15 -0400 A downside of the solution. They need a lot of battery power and computer power to process the data. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613750 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613750 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:35:16 -0400 Says "a fraction of the cost," an important aspect of the solution. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613748 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613748 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:33:56 -0400 This is the basic answer of how the deforestation problem could be fixed. Drones will drop seeds with fertilizer. This is a lot faster than planting by hand. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613740 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613740 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:32:10 -0400 Gives us an understanding of what the issue is. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613734 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613734 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:30:19 -0400 This sentence introduces what direction the article is going in. Obviously, we're going to learn about this idea now. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613729 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294243?scroll_to=2613729 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 15:29:48 -0400 I liked Trevor's style of writing. He used a lot of dialogue which I think helped the story advance and drew readers in. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2612992 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2612992 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 01:27:09 -0400 Referring to herself as the "Captain of the Ship" was really interesting. I liked that analogy and I feel like it pulled me into her essay more. It was a good choice. https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610318 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610318 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 14:55:30 -0400 Banneker talked about freedom. He quoted the Declaration of Independence and talked about liberty. Similar to how Douglass talks about freedom a lot. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588877 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588877 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 15:04:52 -0400 Dialogue is present in this paragraph https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588204 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588204 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 00:52:37 -0400 We get to see some dialogue https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588203 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588203 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 00:52:12 -0400 This shows a level of trust. The author wasn't going to embarrass the boys by naming them, making him trustworthy in a way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588202 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588202 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 00:50:03 -0400 Overall a great use of imagery. Lots of descriptive adjectives. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588201 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588201 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 00:47:09 -0400 Gives direction for the opening paragraph. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588200 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588200 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 00:44:11 -0400