Comments by Mariam Aidemirova Most recent public comments by Mariam Aidemirova https://nowcomment.com/users/112756 Using dialogue of the past that she used was adding to the story https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737668 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263709?scroll_to=2737668 Tue, 08 Mar 2022 14:36:28 -0500 I do think that if she added more perspective on how she was feeling it would take a little bit less from the story. since by giving us logic we can base our feelings on what's going on and not be distracted by feelings. https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2707198 https://nowcomment.com/documents/304185?scroll_to=2707198 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 14:29:29 -0500 This example showed that her care at the hospital might have been considered okay at the time but there were clearly things that's were missed. Them leaving out so many parts of the side effects of these procedures wasn't right. https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2702475 https://nowcomment.com/documents/303660?scroll_to=2702475 Thu, 03 Feb 2022 14:18:55 -0500 this showed a part of him since he was saying how his differences made him "famous" https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645750 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2645750 Tue, 23 Nov 2021 13:35:41 -0500 In this paragraph he does a very good job explaining how he views race. His comparison to chocolate was a very good example in my opinion since no matter the color its still chocolate at the end of the day. https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2643205 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227745?scroll_to=2643205 Sun, 21 Nov 2021 15:30:25 -0500 There has been multiple lawsuits addressing this problem which builds up my case https://nowcomment.com/documents/297480?scroll_to=2642607 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297480?scroll_to=2642607 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 15:33:08 -0500 This paragraph talks mentions the problem I am addressing, which is about how miss leading the organic label is https://nowcomment.com/documents/297480?scroll_to=2642605 https://nowcomment.com/documents/297480?scroll_to=2642605 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 15:28:09 -0500 It makes no sense how laws like this could get passed, being in prison for being an International couple ? Just doing everything to create a segregation of races https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613964 https://nowcomment.com/documents/227673?scroll_to=2613964 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 23:24:03 -0400 This is an perfect example of their possible solution, they are already trying this out for themselves. Which I believe will motivate other countries to put this in consideration if they look at all the benefits it has created. https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612964 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612964 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 00:47:15 -0400 There are already a lot of critiques coming from architects because they don't understand and trust it well enough to convert to this methods https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612961 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612961 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 00:45:31 -0400 This paragraph talks about some complications with the solution https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612959 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612959 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 00:44:33 -0400 This mentions the possible solutions, since we cant avoid building we can at least do it sustainably https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612957 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612957 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 00:42:56 -0400 This paragraph talks about the problem that concrete creates. And it talks about the consequences to the environment https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612955 https://nowcomment.com/documents/294131?scroll_to=2612955 Fri, 29 Oct 2021 00:41:15 -0400 This is where she learned her lesson about how even the people that she aspired to be, they didn't have perfect lives. But they also weren't judgmental about it. Which leads her to admitting her lies. https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610344 https://nowcomment.com/documents/293736?scroll_to=2610344 Tue, 26 Oct 2021 14:58:45 -0400 in this sentence we get a description of the mistress, which is important because it showed who she was a person and this built his experiences as well as what he has learned from https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588906 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290222?scroll_to=2588906 Tue, 05 Oct 2021 15:09:51 -0400