Most recent public comments by Nick O'Hare https://nowcomment.com/users/1204 https://nowcomment.com/documents/3670?scroll_to=10399 https://nowcomment.com/documents/3670?scroll_to=10399 You used 1st person here with "we." I would change it to "Florida would continue to grow steadily after this event and become the state that it is today." Tue, 10 Dec 2013 21:56:59 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/3670?scroll_to=10398 https://nowcomment.com/documents/3670?scroll_to=10398 I thought the market crashed in 1929, not 1926? Is this a typo? Tue, 10 Dec 2013 21:56:59 -0500