Most recent public comments by Kelsey Lopez https://nowcomment.com/users/124286 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317769?scroll_to=2845194 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317769?scroll_to=2845194 Viv has moments where she's fully inspired to make a real change at her school like when she made Moxie. She talks about being different but when it really comes down to it she is just a normal, overly self-conscious teen. This is an example of her kinda backing down from her previous statements of being a rebel. Wed, 20 Jul 2022 05:34:41 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317279?scroll_to=2842573 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317279?scroll_to=2842573 This would be an example of alliteration right? Tue, 05 Jul 2022 18:39:41 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317279?scroll_to=2842544 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317279?scroll_to=2842544 Viv uses the phrase "feeling prickly" whenever she is bothered by something. I just think this word choice is great as it's something you can imagine and almost feel. Her saying this makes it clear she is uncomfortable. Wed, 29 Jun 2022 08:51:30 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317279?scroll_to=2842514 https://nowcomment.com/documents/317279?scroll_to=2842514 Knowing that Viv will eventually start to voice her opinions with the zine, her saying this provides a clear start to her character development. This Viv wouldn't have had the courage to start Moxie. Tue, 05 Jul 2022 19:01:55 -0400