Comments by samiyha jimenez Most recent public comments by samiyha jimenez https://nowcomment.com/users/13142 The elephantine prose meaning awkward or clumsy and mannered prose would be writing in a way that is not formal or graceful. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=331213 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=331213 Fri, 27 Mar 2015 12:13:57 -0400 The first paragraph is a brief introduction into his case of death and the significance of Norman Mailer's existence. I feel like this paragraph is formatted to gain the readers attention. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=331211 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25275?scroll_to=331211 Fri, 27 Mar 2015 12:08:01 -0400 The reader is prepared to realize that Sontag questioned everything in her surroundings. I feel that as a child Sontag was misunderstood. https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=315970 https://nowcomment.com/documents/25280?scroll_to=315970 Fri, 13 Feb 2015 22:35:33 -0500