Most recent public comments by Student Emma Mejia https://nowcomment.com/users/132863 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036956 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036956 Highlights the expensive price tag of a border wall. Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:56:37 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036955 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036955 Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:55:02 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036954 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036954 The author here does a good job of showing how many undocumented immigrants enter legally then simply when their Visa expires. Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:49:21 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036953 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036953 Gives information on how borders walls have not worked in the past Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:47:34 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036952 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036952 Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:46:48 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036951 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036951 Gives data on holes that are dug under border walls to show why they are not practical Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:46:02 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036950 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036950 Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:44:05 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036949 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036949 Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:42:31 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036948 https://nowcomment.com/documents/344265?scroll_to=3036948 The author provides some context on the issues that have lead to the use of and calls for a border wall Wed, 22 Mar 2023 12:40:42 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033276 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033276 Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:00:37 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033275 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033275 Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:00:37 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033274 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033274 This sentence succinctly summarizes the actions taken by the Vice President and her goal. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:00:37 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033273 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033273 The author uses numbers to show the scope of the medical support the US has given El Salvador, Guatemala, and Honduras. This makes a logical appeal Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:00:37 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033271 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343810?scroll_to=3033271 A direct quote is used from Vice President Harris to show the importance of gaining support from other countries to help Central America. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:00:37 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3027548 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3027548 The author uses words like “chaos” and “cruelty” when describing what resulted from Trump’s actions and call for reform. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 05:55:16 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3027544 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3027544 Other people who have pondered this issue have come up with solutions similar to the Biden Admin, so its good to see these ideas being put into action. I think the most surprising things so far has been learning about the amount of families detained in the US. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 05:55:16 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342331?scroll_to=3027533 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342331?scroll_to=3027533 Did this information change your perspective on the issue? Fri, 21 Apr 2023 09:34:17 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3026596 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3026596 Makes a logical appeal to reforming our system by citing how immigrants contribute to our economy, culture, etc. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 05:55:16 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3026593 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3026593 The author uses words like "chaos" and "cruelty" when describing what resulted from Trump's actions and call for reform. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 05:55:16 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3026574 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342983?scroll_to=3026574 Here, the author states "families belong together" appealing to the emotions of the reader to articulate the point that our system needs reform. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 05:55:16 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021342 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021342 Adds an emotional and religious appeal. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:28:28 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021341 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021341 Here the author stresses the need for bipartisanship when it comes to immigration policy. He stresses that to get things done we have to work together efficiently. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:28:28 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021332 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021332 Here the author presents logical solutions to the problem he introduced such as diplomatic negotiation. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:28:28 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021331 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021331 Here the author clearly states what our goal for the immigration system should be. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:28:28 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021330 https://nowcomment.com/documents/342178?scroll_to=3021330 Here the author appeals to the readers emotions by discussing what children who immigrate often go through. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:28:28 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011219 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011219 Here the author cites information to appeal to the emotions of readers. Author could be a little more specific with examples. Gives data on two detainees dying in their custody. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011209 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011209 Cites data in favor of community based solutions compared to others, anticipates the concerns of cost. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011196 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011196 Here the author successfully uses data to point out that community based services for immigrants are cheaper than detaining immigrants. This appeals to logic and is a good response to people who may argue that community based solutions are too expensive. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011189 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011189 Highlights a flaw in ICE's solution to immigration problems by effectively citing a report by immigrant right organizations. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011185 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011185 The author uses data on the number of vacant houses to highlight that community based solutions that help provide housing could work Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011165 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011165 Here the author discusses the mistreatment immigrants face under ICE. This appeals to the emotions of the readers and helps highlight the urgency we need to address this problem with. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011163 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011163 Here the author introduces the solution he will discuss in the article and gives some details on what it includes. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011161 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340907?scroll_to=3011161 Here the author does a good job of using numbers to corroborate the magnitude of the issue of immigration he introduced. Using this data is a good appeal to logic. Fri, 17 Mar 2023 06:22:19 -0700 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340563?scroll_to=3008928 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340563?scroll_to=3008928 The author uses this description to show the magnitude of the storm. Tue, 14 Feb 2023 09:29:15 -0800 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340563?scroll_to=3008921 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340563?scroll_to=3008921 Tue, 14 Feb 2023 09:27:28 -0800 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340563?scroll_to=3008903 https://nowcomment.com/documents/340563?scroll_to=3008903 Here a personal story is told from the perspective of Mary. This story offers a perspective helps humanize Henrietta for the reader, appealing to pathos. Tue, 14 Feb 2023 09:25:01 -0800 https://nowcomment.com/documents/254672?scroll_to=3004104 https://nowcomment.com/documents/254672?scroll_to=3004104 The author includes a quote where Henrietta's body is being described as being burnt "black as tar". This evokes imagery in the readers mind and makes them empathize, appealing to their emotions. Tue, 07 Feb 2023 09:59:51 -0800 https://nowcomment.com/documents/254672?scroll_to=3004077 https://nowcomment.com/documents/254672?scroll_to=3004077 Skloot includes the information that no one asked Henrietta if they could collect a sample from her or told her what they were doing to raise questions of how ethical this action was. This is appealing to Ethos. Tue, 07 Feb 2023 09:53:27 -0800 https://nowcomment.com/documents/254672?scroll_to=3004068 https://nowcomment.com/documents/254672?scroll_to=3004068 Skloot gives background on how her and Deborah were raised to draw a contrast and give context for the reader. This is important to the story as the book deals with themes of race. She uses first person to discuss how she was raised and third to describe how Deborah was raised. This is developing logic. Tue, 07 Feb 2023 09:48:10 -0800