Most recent public comments by Jade Perry https://nowcomment.com/users/133673 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072814 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072814 I wrote this passage to get readers to think about injustice and to raise awareness against the racism that was apparent in this story. In this passage, Jim was representing the mindset of a lot of prejudiced people who were quick to lash out at members of minority communities without actual proof. My hope is to get readers to consider the need to be open-minded and not base their assumptions and judgements on stereotypes. There are two important quotes that I want readers to pay careful attention to. The first is, "He would have shot any black person he saw." This quote serves as a reminder of the kind of rage and hatred aimed at those of another race. It's a stark example of how one justification can be used to target a whole community. The second quote is, "But there had been no investigation into the matter." This line leaves readers to realize the lack of due process and the likelihood that those that were innocent were referred to as guilty in the eyes of the law. It is clear that this story is about more than just what Jim thought. It speaks to an underlying issue of prejudice and injustice that needs to be addressed. I want readers to reflect on this text and apply it to their understanding of how unfairness persists in our society today. So, what are you thinking? What connections can you make to other experiences from the real world? Do you have any thoughts on how to make a change and stand up against these kinds of injustices? Sun, 28 May 2023 01:33:15 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072813 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072813 I wrote this passage with the intention of conveying the character's distinct speech pattern to add realism and humor. I wanted to make sure the reader understood what the character was saying, while also getting a chuckle out of their amazing ability to misunderstand and the effort it takes to comprehend. Some of the lines I wrote that I want you to really take in are: “It was funny how you can completely misread it, even though it's just a southern accent it sounds different when spoken,” and “the effort it takes to comprehend.” I was trying to communicate that there are differences between how we hear words spoken and how they look when written, and that often times, understanding a different accent is a challenge. Ultimately, I want you to think about how language is not just about the words we use, but also how we express ourselves. Thinking about this can really open up your own self-expression, and help you to recognize and appreciate differences in the way we communicate. It can help you to connect with others more deeply. So what do you think? Has this passage helped you to better understand why the character's dialect is complicated to read? Can you relate it to any experiences you have had when communicating with others? How has this made you think differently about language and the way we communicate? I'm eager to hear from you! Sun, 28 May 2023 01:27:54 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072595 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072595 I wrote this passage to create an image in the reader's mind of Lizzie being very sick and wobbly, which is why I chose to describe her sliding into the chair. I also wanted to hint at her fear of something without stating it overtly, so I chose words like 'swayed' and 'fearing'. I think the most important lines in this passage are 'Lizzie swayed and, fearing to fall against the hot woodstove, sank into a chair.' as they convey the image of her sickness and hint at her fear of the woodstove. By using the words 'swayed' and 'fearing', I am suggesting that she was so weak that if she didn't take extra caution, she would have been in danger of hurting herself by falling against the woodstove. I'm hoping the reader will compose a mental image of Lizzie being very weak and in need of a place of safety and comfort. Can you tell me what image you have of Lizzie after reading this passage? Do you think the writer of this passage conveyed a clear image of her? Does this remind you of any other events from books, movies, TV shows or games that you have seen? Fri, 26 May 2023 19:52:38 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072594 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072594 If you know Uncle Ruckus from "The Boondocks" series, then you probably understand what I mean. When he says "roasting' will teach the rest o' 'em they can't lay hands on a white man." It reminds me of how anti-black and pro-white Uncle Ruckus was. Fri, 26 May 2023 19:51:05 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072593 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3072593 It's not very hard for me to read most of this. I think it may be because I have some family from down south, and even my nana, who's from South Carolina, still has her southern accent even after being in Philly for most of her life. Fri, 26 May 2023 19:47:11 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3071369 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3071369 You find yourself drawn to that scene because it's a memory of a time when you were seeking to be seen and represented. Ms. D'Emma's choice of music was a reminder of how shallow this month has become due to the lack of context of other prominent figures in black history. We need to go beyond what's commonly expected and find ways to make our perspective, unique and individual, acknowledged, and valued. As you think of the lack of representation in schools, ask yourself what other figures from black history have been meaningful to you and if there are any genres of music that can be used to represent different voices in history. Try to search for these voices in books, videos, and media to add to the conversation about black history. Tue, 23 May 2023 21:21:17 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3071361 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3071361 Sentence 1: "From the early stages of the English language, African Americans used words and phrases created through the combination of two or more words." This sentence gives important background information about the origin of words used by African Americans; it shows that the words they use come from the combination of two or more words, rather than being derived from a single source. Sentence 2: "This linguistic style is known as African American Vernacular English (AAVE) and is not only used today in many African American communities, but is also increasingly being used by younger Americans in general." This sentence provides further information about the use of AAVE by African American communities, and also shows that its use is becoming more widespread among younger Americans. Sentence 3: "AAVE is unique, as it has its own grammatical and syntactical rules of construction and pronunciation" This sentence is important because it tells us that AAVE has its own distinct rules, which are different from other forms of English. Sentence 4: "This essay will explore the history of AAVE and its current use in the US and abroad." This sentence introduces the focus of the essay - to explore the history and current use of AAVE - and sets out the purpose of the essay. The background information needed to understand the text more deeply is an understanding of the history of AAVE and how and why it has been used by African Americans. This may include aspects such as how the language emerged, the different forms it takes and its similarities and differences compared to other forms of English. If you want to gain a deeper understanding of this text, take a few minutes to re-read it and consider the context in which AAVE is used. Pay attention to any particular words or phrases that may be used in the text, and think about what they are used to convey, or how they are used in different contexts. You may also find it helpful to compare the language used in this essay to other examples of AAVE that you may be familiar with. As you re-read, be sure to add any new thoughts or insights that come up in your reading in a reply! Tue, 23 May 2023 21:12:50 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071012 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071012 Sun, 28 May 2023 01:33:15 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071008 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071008 Sun, 28 May 2023 01:27:54 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071007 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071007 Tue, 23 May 2023 13:37:21 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071006 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3071006 Sun, 28 May 2023 01:21:25 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3070990 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347721?scroll_to=3070990 Tue, 23 May 2023 13:30:59 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347058?scroll_to=3064824 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347058?scroll_to=3064824 One standard and well-known rule in black churches is always to pay attention, ESPECIALLY when one of the older women is near you (A grandmother, great auntie, the church auntie,) I went through a lot of elbowing and plucking when I went to church. Mon, 08 May 2023 19:42:26 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347058?scroll_to=3064820 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347058?scroll_to=3064820 Back in those days, young black boys would often be called by everything BUT their names. They'd be called, "Nigger," "Boy," and other terms that were used in a degrading manor. Mon, 08 May 2023 19:38:07 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347058?scroll_to=3064816 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347058?scroll_to=3064816 Often in American history, you would see stories and lifestyles just like these; which were extremely common in black communities. The man of the household would be the breadwinner and work relentlessly to support his job doing hard labor jobs, and other similar physically demanding jobs. And often those same hardworking men would turn to liquor, to cope with the stress they were going through while working for the entire week. Mon, 08 May 2023 19:35:03 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347059?scroll_to=3062132 https://nowcomment.com/documents/347059?scroll_to=3062132 When I was younger I didn't attend church very often. My mom-mom on my dad's side was very lenient with my cousins. However, when it came to church, she didn't play. She always talked about how the world wasn't the same ever since people started playing too much with the lord and ignoring the word of the lord. When we would do anything wrong in the church, the car ride back would be full of her talking about us doing that would only lead us to a life with the devil and heathens. This comment just brought back those memories. Thu, 11 May 2023 14:00:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3062054 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3062054 Wed, 03 May 2023 09:32:19 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3061934 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3061934 I wonder if the words they are being given are from AAVE and they have to use that word in a sentence Tue, 23 May 2023 21:12:50 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055391 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055391 This is the kind of stuff you hear about from older people, their "back-in-the-day" stories. Wed, 19 Apr 2023 19:34:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055390 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055390 It's similar to when you hear someone saying that you "act white," it's like certain emotions, forms of speech, or body language is often geared toward white people. So, when a black person does any of those things they are "acting white," Wed, 19 Apr 2023 19:25:07 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055389 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055389 My middle school didn't allow us to bring combs to school for a while after some girl threw her comb at a teacher and it hit their eye. Wed, 19 Apr 2023 19:17:01 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055388 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055388 I found it ironic how LaVander Peeler changed his comment. When he originally used the "f-word," and switched to using what can be seen as a more "acceptable" description. He did this to avoid getting in trouble but still used it sarcastically and in an offensive manor. Wed, 19 Apr 2023 19:06:22 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055387 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055387 Making a comparison to my own personal teachings, specific things from my grandmother. She always tells me stories about how she grew up and when things began to change around her, regarding drugs and gun violence and how it only got worse as time went on. Even though the ones who had seemed to be the root had either been arrested or were dead, they only passed it onto the next generation. Wed, 19 Apr 2023 18:55:13 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055371 https://nowcomment.com/documents/345985?scroll_to=3055371 This line reminded me of a photo that I saw with a picture of a guy from a movie with a "Smurf House" headline. Wed, 19 Apr 2023 18:50:48 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3054168 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3054168 This reminds me of a time during freshman year when Ms. D'Emma played "Changes" by 2pac during black history month. I was a little thrown off, it just felt like the common misconception about what represents black people. For example, in middle school when all we would do during black history month went over the same three figures; MLK, Malcolm X, and Rosa Park. Tue, 23 May 2023 21:21:17 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3041491 https://nowcomment.com/documents/343951?scroll_to=3041491 Wed, 29 Mar 2023 09:42:59 -0400