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      <description>Is &quot;a Thing in the bursh&quot; or bush a black person?</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 26 May 2023 20:44:45 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Book title</title>
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      <description>My favorite part in a book is when they mention the book title. I have been wondering what long division means in reference to the book.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 10:28:27 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Book One similarity</title>
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      <description>In the beginning of the first book the way City described how LaVander Peeler smelled stuck out to a lot of people, including me. City's humor and the way he dramatizes things is still apparent.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 10:21:30 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Black Culture</title>
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      <description>I'm not very sure how many black people's grandparents, aunts, or parents watch &quot;the stories&quot; now. But it's something I'm familiar with and have heard a few other people talking about how people in their family watch &quot;the stories&quot;. (Stories are just soap opera TV shows.)</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 10:16:49 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Interesting</title>
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      <description>My first thought was the they both time traveled.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 10:13:47 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Book one similarity</title>
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      <description>City described the Melahatchie houses in book one the same way, being &quot;lifted off the ground by cinder blocks&quot;.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 10:12:27 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>My edits</title>
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      <description>I liked my second AI response better but the ending talked about something that didn't happen in the book.
The ending was...
&quot;This is further demonstrated in other parts of the book, when the narrator and their family are used as props for a white couple's photo shoot, as well as when the narrator is told he is not &quot;good enough&quot; for the school's student body. These moments further illustrate the dominant culture's disregard of people of color and the prejudices that exist in today's society.&quot;</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 09:59:07 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>What could be the thing City couldn't understand yet that people fantasize about?</title>
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      <description>This passage is discussing the effects of racism and how this contributes to the developing perceptions of race among the narrator, their family, and the society they inhabit. It offers insight into the disconnect that many people of color feel in a predominantly white society, as well as illustrating the dehumanizing effects of racism and how it can create feelings of rage and desperation in those it affects. Additionally, this passage can be seen as a reflection of the dominant culture's perception of race, by demonstrating the privileges that white people have in the US, while contrasting this with the experiences of people of color. The text highlights the unfairness of the systems in place and how they keep people of color in a state of oppression and despair. </description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 12 May 2023 09:59:07 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>The book finding him</title>
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      <description>When I read this it reminded me of when City found Long Division. After he finished the book, I wonder if he felt the same way.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 11 May 2023 09:19:11 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Book One Connection</title>
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      <description>I think the &quot;Night Time Woods&quot; was mentioned in book one when City and Shayla went to the woods and were recording/taking pictures of each other</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 09 May 2023 08:37:39 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Dumb choice</title>
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      <description>He's been stuck in a shed for days so I don't understand why he would call the grandmom out her name, she's the one with the power in this situation.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 05 May 2023 18:01:47 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>&quot;You wrote it in your book&quot;
I'm so confused about what Soo Sad is trying to say. It also makes me wonder if he's a time traveler. I just have too many questions.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 05 May 2023 17:58:25 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Book 2</title>
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      <description>If Book 2 is the Long Division City is reading, I can't wait to see how it's going to be written. The story being written by the man who is responsible for Baize disappearing is intriguing. </description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 05 May 2023 17:56:10 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Another point</title>
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      <description>I also wanted to point out how in this passage he starts the sentences by saying &quot;I heard&quot;. It's more of an example of how City has learned about his family history from others' perspectives. </description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 05 May 2023 17:30:56 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Genealogy and Personal Identity</title>
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      <description>There are a few things in this passage that connects to the theme.
- &quot;storeis-sentences, really were all I had of my granddaddy.&quot; Similar to what we're doing for our benchmark, City is reliant on other people's memories to learn about his granddad.
- &quot;I heard that he hated to bathe and loved to eat and fight, like me,&quot; is a connection to personal identity and family history. City learned about a similarity between him and his grandfather.</description>
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      <title>City still surprises me</title>
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      <description>City is one of the most interesting characters I have read. Why is he casually putting his business out to strangers? His grandmom didn't even want him to look in the shed.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 05 May 2023 17:19:18 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Stuck Out</title>
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      <description>The feelings City has toward LaVander still confuses me. He's leaving his brush, his most prized possession, and it was the first thing on the list. </description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 17 May 2023 20:10:35 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Race and Inequality Theme</title>
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      <description>The way City explained how being a black person, or any POC, was very well said. 
&quot;treated like a visitor on their own road, in their own town, in their own country.&quot;
City explaining how people in America make black people feel out of place and worthless even in places where they should feel comfortable shows racial inequality and race relations in America, past and present.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 21:17:38 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Maybe we're getting somewhere</title>
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      <description>I can't wait to figure out the backstory of this book. This is the first time somebody else has acknowledged the book. </description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 20:59:38 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Surprised</title>
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      <description>I had my guesses of who could've been in the shed and what City's grandmom did. This was one of them but reading it still surprised me. It shows how much she cares about City. Now what she was telling City makes more sense.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 20:55:11 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Culture</title>
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      <description>In Black culture, especially when we were younger and have been playing outside for hours, when you come in the house somebody will say &quot;you smell like outside&quot;. For some reason I feel like I'm just now able to really smell and recognize 
the outside smell.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 20:12:48 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>Is City writing the book? Is the book one we're reading actually book two, the book City could be writing? That makes the book even more interesting because it flips in multiple ways.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 13:10:40 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Putting myself in City's shoes</title>
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      <description>City saying that seeing himself pop up when he googled the word broke his heart stuck out. He's associated with a word that he doesn't even understand or heard before the contest. Compared to the beginning of the story to these big moments that has been happening to City has shown a new side of him. The hurt he's feeling is starting to show more and more.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 13:08:06 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Breakthrough moment</title>
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      <description>This seems like a breakthrough moment to me. The reason City was given that word wasn't directly said or explained now. Somebody who's more clueless to this subject might've not caught on to it before this moment.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 04 May 2023 08:55:25 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Teenage boy behavior</title>
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      <description>I pointed this out another time but City's teenage boy characteristics really shine through. Why are you going to bed with crumbs and stains?</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 08 May 2023 19:35:18 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Twilight reference?</title>
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      <description>This could be a stretch but I think this might be a twilight reference because the last movie did come out sometime in 2012.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 02 May 2023 15:01:01 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>&quot;Hope it all stopped hurting.&quot; City has been this very energetic, kind of nonchalant, carefree character. Him showing the complete opposite just stuck out to me.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 02 May 2023 14:53:14 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>I don't remember if Soo Sad's gender was mentioned. But them saying hey girl hey caught me off guard. Maybe its the way I imagine it being said.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 02 May 2023 14:49:55 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Important</title>
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      <description>I think this moment is going to come up later in the book, it seems important to the book/plot.</description>
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      <description>I imagined a small thin comb being thrown on the ground. In my mind I could hear the noise it probably made too</description>
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      <title>A little too late</title>
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      <description>Now you mention it? He already said his name and who he was staying with. He couldn've ran at that point.</description>
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      <description>It caught me a little off guard that City told these random people his name. Thinking about it, if they watched the show they probably somewhat remember. But, the way he willingly told them made me think about the cultural differences between the country and the city. I wouldn't have been so quick to say my name especially if they didn't ask.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 02 May 2023 14:41:39 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>Reading this paragraph just stuck out to me. City saying that old people care too much about white people's opinion seems familiar to something I've heard before. I can't pin point what that thing is exactly. &quot;They can only do as much harm as you let them,&quot;</description>
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      <title>Limitations</title>
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      <description>What the coach was telling City is what a lot of black people probably feel like. The need to be on your best behavior 24/7, on your P's and Q's. The other side of that is how unfair it is that black people can't express themselves like a normal human, anger for example as City did, without extra criticism. Black people always have to be cautious about their actions.</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 24 Apr 2023 14:14:13 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>It&#8217;s nice to read about how comfortable his grandmother makes him feel. It&#8217;s something that people can relate to, your grandmom&#8217;s comfort.</description>
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      <description>Parts like this in the book I can tell that it&#8217;s a 14-year-old boy talking. After everything that just happened he&#8217;s still talking about how good his hair looks.</description>
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      <description>A split?!</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 23 Apr 2023 22:49:15 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>Is she really running after him? Why would he even run in the first place?</description>
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      <description>The way Kiese Laymon describes this event of City learning he&#8217;s going to get &#8220;a whupping&#8221; I&#8217;m able to imagine it. The way he reacted is familiar. His grandmom brought it up so casually and it caught him off guard. &#8220;Like it was only a whupping&#8221;.</description>
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      <description>This is another piece of evidence showing how City realizes how his grandmother code switches. This is an example of how the book comments on contemporary social climate.</description>
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      <title>City's Realization</title>
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      <description>It&#8217;s interesting to read City realizing that even his grandmother code switches. He described her as this confident woman but it shows that in this society, socially people have to switch who they are depending on who&#8217;s in their presence.</description>
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      <title>Why is the chapter named &quot;Click That&quot;?</title>
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      <description></description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 18 Apr 2023 15:25:56 -0400</pubDate>
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      <description>City imagining himself talking to his mom and saying &quot;All things considered&quot; might be considered satire. Before he mocked LaVander for always saying it.</description>
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      <description>Based on what the girls were saying about what they would've done if they were in City's situation I think they're black. With that in mind, I wonder if they stopped turning and smiling at City because of how he handled the situation with the three white boys.</description>
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      <description>Saying that the people of color were only at the contest for decoration lets readers understand the situation</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 17 Apr 2023 14:10:27 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Interesting</title>
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      <description>Before this I thought City denying that he is &quot;homosexual&quot; was because he wasn't.Now I know it was more of a defensive thing</description>
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      <title>Summarizing each chapter's use of satire and commentary</title>
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      <description>While reading chapters 1-4 of Long Division book one, I was easily able to catch on to Kiese Laymon&#8217;s writing style. His commentary, social and political, and use of satire plays a big part in the book. It adds on to the relatableness and shows how contemporary the book is. In the first chapter the use of satire, &#8220;I don&#8217;t think he understands what the sentences he be using really mean&#8221; for example, helps build the foundation of the book to understand the characters. In chapters 2-4 I noticed more of Laymon&#8217;s commentary, from talking about Obama to cultural references like &#8220;black words&#8221;.</description>
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      <description>sounds like a song lyric</description>
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      <description>Reminds me of the &#8220;token black friend concept&#8221; or people of color being used for diversity points</description>
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      <description>She called his brush a prop and basically said that City wasn&#8217;t special enough for rules to be changed</description>
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      <description>
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      <description>I think this is connecting or introducing the idea that black people only win big in sports</description>
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      <description>The way you described LaVander Peeler changed my thoughts about him. We only learn about him based on City&#8217;s perspective, which is very biased. I applaud you for being able to look past that and see the benefit and importance of his character in the book.

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      <description>The character I chose to create was City, the main character. There are few concrete details describing City in the book. He&#8217;s a fourteen-year-old, African American boy, and waves as his hairstyle. Knowing that City is fourteen and in ninth grade contributes to why he responds and acts the way he does in the book. The characteristics described shows his immaturity but also his seriousness when it comes to being a black boy in America.
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      <description>While reading chapters 1-4 of Long Division book one, I was easily able to catch on to Kiese Laymon&#8217;s writing style. His commentary, social and political, and use of satire plays a big part in the book. It adds on to the relatableness and shows how contemporary the book is. In the first chapter the use of satire, &#8220;I don&#8217;t think he understands what the sentences he be using really mean&#8221; for example, helps build the foundation of the book to understand the characters. In chapters 2-4 I noticed more of Laymon&#8217;s commentary, from talking about Obama to cultural references like &#8220;black words&#8221;. </description>
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      <description>sounds like a song lyric</description>
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      <description>Reminds me of the &quot;token black friend concept&quot; or people of color being used for diversity points</description>
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      <description>She called his brush a prop and basically said that City wasn't special enough for rules to be changed</description>
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      <description>-obama's comments on missing children</description>
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      <description>&quot;loving mean&quot;</description>
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      <description>&quot;Don't matter what you think...&quot;</description>
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      <description>I think this is connecting or introducing the idea that black people only win big in sports</description>
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      <description>I'm glad City pointed this out. It's very contradicting to call him white as an insult but he praises them by saying they're &quot;less ignorant&quot; for example.</description>
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      <description>After reading this, I wonder even more about Peeler's race. For some reason, I have a feeling that this could be internalized racism. He sounds like a black person that acts like they're better than black people. 

Something else that stood out was him saying that white Americans are less ignorant &quot;by nature&quot;. What nature does he mean? Does he mean it in a systemic racism way or white people are biologically smarter than black people?</description>
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      <description>I agree it's only acceptable when used by people in the same race AND the people involved are aware that it's comedic.</description>
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      <description>It kind of caught me off guard that LaVander Peeler thinks being racist is fun. It makes me wonder what his race or ethnicity is. </description>
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      <description>I can tell this is a 14 year old boys perspective</description>
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      <description>This is the second time City being, or not being, a white homeless fat homosexual is brought up. It makes me wonder what City actually looks like.</description>
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      <description>In the short essay Hey Mama by Kiese Laymon Mississippi was also a significant place. It seems like he writes about things he's already familiar with.
https://www.guernicamag.com/hey-mama/</description>
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      <description>What was in the finals that reminds City of LaVander Peeler?</description>
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      <description>I like that Kiese Laymon decided to use an Erykah Badu quote. It's interesting how both epigraphs connect in some way. The both hint to what the books are going to be about.</description>
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