Most recent public comments by Tamara Giorda https://nowcomment.com/users/136517 https://nowcomment.com/documents/349782?scroll_to=3098658 https://nowcomment.com/documents/349782?scroll_to=3098658 Hi July! I agree with you, this story is not suitable for young adults. I had to read the same book to do the essay and all the stories are tedious! I like your essay! Your attention grabber seems a real anecdote, the vocabulary you have used is really nice, and I think that your thesis statement is strong and real! Mon, 14 Aug 2023 20:43:48 -0400