Comments by Susanna Taylor Most recent public comments by Susanna Taylor https://nowcomment.com/users/137058 Really good reminder by having this here https://nowcomment.com/documents/354087?scroll_to=3110904 https://nowcomment.com/documents/354087?scroll_to=3110904 Fri, 01 Sep 2023 19:38:39 -0400 Really good reminder by having this here https://nowcomment.com/documents/350606?scroll_to=3090807 https://nowcomment.com/documents/350606?scroll_to=3090807 Wed, 19 Jul 2023 04:31:46 -0400 I like the second half a lot, but I think this first half is over complicated and could put people off. https://nowcomment.com/documents/354087?scroll_to=3110902 https://nowcomment.com/documents/354087?scroll_to=3110902 BLS info should all be in 1 box so you don't have to look elsewhere for the info. Pause and check should come after ALS, not along side. I think you have tried to indicate this by matching the red colour to ALS steps, but it needs to be clearer. I suggest reformat this area to 3 wider boxes stacked vertically. Fri, 01 Sep 2023 19:38:39 -0400 I like the second half a lot, but I think this first half is over complicated and could put people off. https://nowcomment.com/documents/350606?scroll_to=3090806 https://nowcomment.com/documents/350606?scroll_to=3090806 BLS info should all be in 1 box so you don't have to look elsewhere for the info. Pause and check should come after ALS, not along side. I think you have tried to indicate this by matching the red colour to ALS steps, but it needs to be clearer. I suggest reformat this area to 3 wider boxes stacked vertically. Thu, 20 Jul 2023 10:09:59 -0400