Comments by 2024 Evan Chisholm Most recent public comments by 2024 Evan Chisholm https://nowcomment.com/users/140942 Use of Imagery https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3203855 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3203855 The use of imagery to describe Zakariyya's behavior paints the picture of the type of man he was very well. Mon, 11 Dec 2023 13:26:16 -0500 Emotional Sentence https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3200887 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3200887 Very punchy sentence that holds a lot of emotion. Starting the sentence with a conjunction makes the sentence more impactful in my opinion, but I can't put my finger on why. When I read this I picture someone sitting away in silence, letting this struggle eat away at them. Tue, 05 Dec 2023 12:49:11 -0500 Wither https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3200882 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3200882 But he withered quickly. The choice to use the word withered about Gey's condition is a powerful decision. Wither is a word we commonly associate with nature and decomposition. This man was decomposing while he was alive. Frightening stuff. Tue, 05 Dec 2023 12:47:41 -0500 Appeals to author's character. (Ethos) https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3176299 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3176299 This appeals to the character of the author because it offers a comparison and a decision. It shows that the author had the resilience to go against the request of the editor to remove the Lacks from the story all together.= Wed, 08 Nov 2023 13:43:04 -0500 The oil refinery by my house in Bonutiful is currently integrating tier 3 fuel into their system but have not yet fully made the switch to all tier 3. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360578?scroll_to=3168891 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360578?scroll_to=3168891 Wed, 01 Nov 2023 15:44:05 -0400 Tier 3 fuel has a lower sulfur level than other fuels used before the itnroduction of tier 3. The lower sulfur level is intended to be better for the planet and it's people. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360578?scroll_to=3168886 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360578?scroll_to=3168886 Wed, 01 Nov 2023 15:43:25 -0400 Tier 3 fuel is designed to reduce emissions in factories and cars. Utah is implementing currently. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360578?scroll_to=3168882 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360578?scroll_to=3168882 Wed, 01 Nov 2023 15:42:36 -0400