Most recent public comments by 2024 Yu-Wei (Henry) Wang https://nowcomment.com/users/140943 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247264 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247264 This shows how people feel living in air pollution and emphasizes the urgency of tackling the problem of air pollution in the city. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:33:02 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247300 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247300 This shows how people feel living in air pollution and emphasizes the urgency of tackling the problem of air pollution in the city. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:37:25 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247262 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247262 Especially for people who live in SLC, when people look out the window and see haze around the city, it can feel really awful. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:28:51 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247297 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247297 Especially for people who live in SLC, when people look out the window and see haze around the city, it can feel really awful. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:37:25 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247258 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247258 The use of senses really precisely describes what it feels like being under bad air quality. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:12:59 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247295 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247295 The use of senses really precisely describes what it feels like being under bad air quality. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:37:24 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247255 https://nowcomment.com/documents/367677?scroll_to=3247255 Besides from the poor air quality in SLC currently, the toxins in the Great Salt Lake is also a huge threat to people's lives and the environment in SLC. Sun, 25 Feb 2024 23:49:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247296 https://nowcomment.com/documents/368199?scroll_to=3247296 Besides from the poor air quality in SLC currently, the toxins in the Great Salt Lake is also a huge threat to people's lives and the environment in SLC. Mon, 26 Feb 2024 00:37:25 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3204143 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3204143 In the second sentence, Skloot used repetition of "in" words to describe how mischievous Little Alfred is. The repetitions of rippin, runnin, drinkin, and druggin describes a series of action that Alfred and help emphasize how naughty and playful Alfred is. The repetition of "in" also sets a sound rhythm that helps draw readers attention to Alfred's actions. Mon, 11 Dec 2023 20:38:57 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3201424 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3201424 In the first sentence, Skloot made use of dashes to add additional information and details of different kinds of cells scientists had grown. The additional details also gives a better insight on how scientists utilized tissue samples from their family, patients, and themselves. Skloot prolonged the second sentence by adding colon and semicolons to illustrate examples and demonstrate how the cells contribute to some historic discoveries. Tue, 05 Dec 2023 23:03:25 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362435?scroll_to=3196257 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362435?scroll_to=3196257 Skloot made use of imagery languages to describe the industrial scale profit cell distribution center mentioned in the previous paragraph. Skloot described the appearance of the ware house to the conveyor belt in the factory, and then to a detailed description of the tubes on the conveyor belt. The zoomed in description of the warehouse helps create a sense of involvement for the readers. Tue, 28 Nov 2023 02:00:47 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3184853 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3184853 There is a detailed description of the procedure Mary goes through before touching Henrietta's sample. The detailed description offers a sense to illustrate how careful Mary is to prevent the cells to be contaminated. A simile is used to compare a freezer's door to the door of the cubicles. This analogy compares the cubicle door to a common item we see in our life which helps the reader to understand how tight the door is. Tue, 14 Nov 2023 15:10:09 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3181635 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3181635 In this sentence, the author made use of analogies to describe Henrietta's pain. In reality, Henrietta might not necessarily have a knot in her womb, but the author uses a knot to describe that Henrietta might feel like something is twisted and tied in her body that is bringing her huge pain. Mon, 13 Nov 2023 16:30:54 -0500