Comments by Sr. Talon Grantz Most recent public comments by Sr. Talon Grantz https://nowcomment.com/users/140984 The author makes the rhetorical choice quoting McKusick saying "there was no effort to explain". https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3203847 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3203847 He sums up the discontinuity between the statements of the doctors and day by showing it is very difficult for anyone without a medical degree and especially uneducated people to make decisions and have truly informed consent. Mon, 11 Dec 2023 12:15:56 -0500 Syntax https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3201824 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3201824 The author Gey's dedication to his work through describing the process in which he captured some of his cells. Before a possibly life saving operation Gey focused on samples of his tumor trying to make them just like Henrietta's. Wed, 06 Dec 2023 11:01:47 -0500 Here the author is focusing on how Turner Station had problems at the root. People never were sure how to spell it or what it was hinting the population was uneducated and although it was called good luck, living in Turner Station was nothing of the sort. https://nowcomment.com/documents/362435?scroll_to=3196254 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362435?scroll_to=3196254 Tue, 28 Nov 2023 01:27:16 -0500 Sugar. The choice to refer to cancer as sugar whether or not the cancer is related to the sweetness of sugar still invokes an interesting conflict. Death is sometimes also said to smell sweet which may be something the author is hoping we notice as well. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3178286 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3178286 Fri, 10 Nov 2023 01:10:16 -0500 Competition can be good but it can also seriously hurt if the way to get ahead is damaging the competition. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170112 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170112 Thu, 02 Nov 2023 12:06:12 -0400 Receipts please. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170091 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170091 Thu, 02 Nov 2023 12:01:45 -0400 Good job summing up the issues and goals that conflict with eachother. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170085 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170085 Thu, 02 Nov 2023 11:58:59 -0400 Interesting. I would love some recipts. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170082 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170082 Thu, 02 Nov 2023 11:56:59 -0400 This is true https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170080 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360676?scroll_to=3170080 Thu, 02 Nov 2023 11:56:11 -0400