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      <title>good opening</title>
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      <description>I like how this opens with an image that the author gives us of the beauty of national parks.</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 26 Feb 2024 22:34:33 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>set up dialogue.</title>
      <link>https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3202728</link>
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      <description>This entire paragraph is Deborah talking about how there are two sides to the story, but the paragraph before it really set's it up by ending with &quot;But by the time I got the message and called her back, she'd changed her mind.&quot;</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 07 Dec 2023 14:17:24 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>change in the main focus</title>
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      <description>This is the sentence where this chapter changes from focusing on Deborah and decides to focus on Joe. Specifically how Joe became a murderer.</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Dec 2023 10:34:11 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Description, and instruction.</title>
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      <description>This sentence sets up two details about this chapter. The first being a description of the place the author is in, and the other being the instruction given to the author.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 28 Nov 2023 01:43:46 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This chapter starts by stating, &quot;Henrietta knew nothing about her cells growing in a laboratory.&quot;</title>
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      <description>This connects the past chapter all about Henrietta's cells, to the new chapter all about her personal life.</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 13 Nov 2023 16:11:36 -0500</pubDate>
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