Comments by Kalli B Most recent public comments by Kalli B https://nowcomment.com/users/141232 Anecdote https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3204029 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362437?scroll_to=3204029 This paragraph goes from the family being scared they all have cancer to a story about when Henrietta died. It creates a break in the moment to examine a story and how people felt in that moment. Mon, 11 Dec 2023 14:25:14 -0500 Skloot emphasizes Joe's patience and need guilt by only saying to the police who he is and what he did. She did this by writing short sentences with no adjectives or adverbs, just who he is and what he did. https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3200881 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362436?scroll_to=3200881 This makes the situation very dramatic as we can't tell what the police would do based off of the information provided to them. Tue, 05 Dec 2023 12:46:26 -0500 Skloot uses hypothesis to analyze what the older women of the YWCA believe the cells could do. They want to believe that immortal cells, might be able to preserve areas from years of aging. Almost like reversing the ageing process. https://nowcomment.com/documents/362435?scroll_to=3194847 https://nowcomment.com/documents/362435?scroll_to=3194847 Mon, 27 Nov 2023 10:55:45 -0500 This paragraph uses history and shows how creating the Pap smear revolutionized how Cancer could be examined. This allowed doctors to look at precancerous cells and be able to tell the difference between them and real cancer cells. This revolutionized how https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3177853 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3177853 doctors were able to look or use cancer or precancerous cells, in their own research to find cures or ways to help remove or prevent cancer from spreading. Thu, 09 Nov 2023 14:22:31 -0500 This paragraph does an incredible job identifying how cancer starts, how it is shaped, and how it spreads insanely quickly, in terms that are easy to understand for those who may not understand the science behind it. https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3176272 https://nowcomment.com/documents/360952?scroll_to=3176272 Wed, 08 Nov 2023 13:21:43 -0500