Comments by Maria Garlock Most recent public comments by Maria Garlock https://nowcomment.com/users/147473 This is supposed to represent cville skyline (‘city’). I am not sure what would represent cville best so I thought montanas and sunset with a little building symbol was best. Maybe the historic - esque building may be better https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441432 https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441432 Sat, 15 Feb 2025 08:00:00 -0500 It is a type of blossom. This flower can be any flower we want it to be, it’s just blossoms are (in my opinion) very vibrant and easier to draw in the petals and speak on some flower motifs in latinoamericanos https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441431 https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441431 Fri, 14 Feb 2025 20:18:23 -0500 I agree, it makes me want to not have much detail on the dancers at all to keep it simple and not bring in discussion on their form/attire/color of attire etc https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441430 https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441430 Fri, 14 Feb 2025 20:17:12 -0500 I agree. I think I am going to go with a different approach here. I’m working on an idea that has people dancing on a music note with party elements surrounding, may not associate their attire to any specific country https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441429 https://nowcomment.com/documents/390753?scroll_to=3441429 Fri, 14 Feb 2025 20:16:07 -0500 i suggest removing the little circular leaf https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362174 https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362174 Mon, 16 Sep 2024 21:51:28 -0400 i suggest bulleting each ticket price just to make things slightly easier to read. https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362172 https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362172 TICKETS! -kids -teens -adults Mon, 16 Sep 2024 21:50:53 -0400 i agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362170 https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362170 Mon, 16 Sep 2024 21:50:01 -0400 i would either remove the flags completely or have the entire image shown https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362168 https://nowcomment.com/documents/382067?scroll_to=3362168 Mon, 16 Sep 2024 21:49:23 -0400 I actually recommend switching the text with the maquina performers picture, condense the info and making that text bulleted https://nowcomment.com/documents/381315?scroll_to=3357709 https://nowcomment.com/documents/381315?scroll_to=3357709 Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:41:45 -0400 I think bullets would be nicer https://nowcomment.com/documents/381315?scroll_to=3357708 https://nowcomment.com/documents/381315?scroll_to=3357708 Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:40:13 -0400 I am also indifferent but leaning more towards removing the flags. https://nowcomment.com/documents/381315?scroll_to=3357707 https://nowcomment.com/documents/381315?scroll_to=3357707 Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:39:09 -0400 I think we will go with the previous years’ logo! https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336126 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336126 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:36:20 -0400 With using the previous years’ logo and that elegant/classy/formal style, this might be conflicting with something bold..ill see what i can do https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336125 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336125 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:35:39 -0400 Does this mean a bold color tshirt—-not white? https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336124 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336124 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:34:44 -0400 We can do bold…i am always for that, but that does somewhat surprise me as we hadn’t really done that elsewhere/other Branding ways, other than with Latino elements/festival-like fonts .. ill think on that https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336123 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336123 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:35:39 -0400 I see, it looks like we will use that last phrase ‘building a community without barriers’ - that’s a perf slogan to put there https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336122 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336122 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:33:16 -0400 Speaking on that, does SB have a phrase that is commonly associated with the branding? Such as “Sin BARRERAS, simple para todos” or something along those lines? https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336121 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336121 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:32:23 -0400 Im okay without my name. We area all doing this together, so the SB logo/info is enough :) (for all) https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336120 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336120 Wed, 31 Jul 2024 07:52:26 -0400 I agree! Ill add that logo back in then:) https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336119 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378795?scroll_to=3336119 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:29:58 -0400 Do either of you know the exact dimensions of the poster? Sorry if this was already mentioned…just want to know for res. Purposes and exporting the proper pixel:) https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336118 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336118 Wed, 31 Jul 2024 10:06:29 -0400 Yep, will add that to the next draft. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336117 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:17:58 -0400 It is the phone number! Must’ve gotten cut off https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336116 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336116 Tue, 30 Jul 2024 23:17:46 -0400 I agree with Dan. I can make a draft with the circle one ( i initially started to!) but i did not like the mix of horizontal +circle elements so close together. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336115 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378800?scroll_to=3336115 Wed, 31 Jul 2024 07:33:28 -0400 Dan/Andrea/All,if you could decide which color/color style (gradient/solid/blocking) you like the best (maybe we could narrow down to 5), I will apply the changes accordingly to those 5. Or if you think there is a better color/style, let me know. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335524 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335524 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 18:04:20 -0400 I can draft the two options here, the line of flags and the circle. I think both are nice. But i think the O in sabroso might be a little confusing and not as ”centered” https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335523 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335523 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 18:06:59 -0400 Agree, sounds good https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335522 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335522 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 16:56:20 -0400 I like the right side orientation and layout…though I do agree maybe i could clean up the left side. I actually think that filling this space with these elements adds some character here https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335521 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335521 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 18:06:33 -0400 I didn’t update this! My fault, i want this to be changed to the dots, just forgot to update it. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335520 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335520 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 16:54:55 -0400 Yes, we should have room. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335519 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335519 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 16:54:29 -0400 Ill change that, i agree. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335518 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335518 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 16:54:16 -0400 I dont, but i don’t mind the gradient effect here for the yellow. I think some colors such as this one does as good job emphasizing the poster. I didnt like it with the red lol https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335517 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335517 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 16:53:52 -0400 Yes, i agree. We should maybe keep them the same color , just a different tone (dark green vs light green) https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335516 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335516 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 18:05:52 -0400 Yes, this will depend on the image itself. Ill adjust the music notes accordingly https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335515 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335515 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 18:05:03 -0400 There will be equal amount of space from the text and the photos! Just a placeholder for now. https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335514 https://nowcomment.com/documents/378700?scroll_to=3335514 Sun, 28 Jul 2024 16:51:42 -0400 I feel the info about ticket purchasing is not as clear. https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329228 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329228 'Purchase your tickets in advance' is helpful, but is the ticket purchasing happening at the QR code or elsewhere? . We could say Purchase tickets in advance by scanning this QR code! (Kids are free) or something more claro? Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:50:46 -0400 Is there any way we could align the date with the 'save the date' banner? I feel that the 'save the date' banner takes away from the actual date slightly (it looks just as big/bigger) but curious what you all think too! https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329227 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329227 Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:47:06 -0400 also, it looks like the bulleted list is the only body of text that is right justified. could we make it centered or left justified to be consistent? otherwise this area looks great https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329225 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329225 Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:43:55 -0400 What do the bullet graphics serve? If we have them, is there any way they could be on the left side of the text? It seems out of place being on the right, esp since we are reading left to right https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329224 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329224 Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:43:55 -0400 could we add an exclamation after info? "info!" https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329223 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329223 Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:40:04 -0400 colors are better, though i suggest less green? maybe panton 13-0755 tpx, primrose yellow. just a thought https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329222 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329222 Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:39:16 -0400 i agree, could we make the background blue color a bit brighter? such as the same blue from the honduras flag https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329221 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377698?scroll_to=3329221 Mon, 08 Jul 2024 23:37:58 -0400 OR making the "Sin Barreras" + body text and logo condensed more to fill the entire bottom line, making the shape narrower, and aligning the QR code right below the 'purchase your tickets' in the left column body text. https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328527 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328527 Sun, 07 Jul 2024 13:53:37 -0400 I suggest maybe simply having 'SCAN FOR MORE INFO' and keeping the QR code here https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328526 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328526 Sun, 07 Jul 2024 13:53:37 -0400 Is there any way we could make this 'circle' a square with rounded corners(the same shape as the rectangle below with sin barreras info.)? https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328525 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328525 There seems to be a lot of good info here, but it is slightly hard to read since the email/contact info is so close to the 'for more info'. just a thought :) Sat, 06 Jul 2024 21:08:38 -0400 Could we also center/align the date to the title of Cville Sabroso? https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328523 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328523 Sat, 06 Jul 2024 21:05:45 -0400 Could we change this font to be the same as the others? https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328089 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328089 Sun, 07 Jul 2024 13:40:05 -0400 What purpose do the red arrows serve? I recommend we remove them since we aren’t using them elsewhere and this is a very informative bubble. https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328088 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328088 Fri, 05 Jul 2024 19:58:03 -0400 Is there any way we could get the body text right aligned instead of centered? https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328087 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328087 Fri, 05 Jul 2024 19:58:49 -0400 I agree the should be a darker color or the background be a lighter color for more clarity. https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328086 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328086 Fri, 05 Jul 2024 19:49:28 -0400 Is there any way we could make the date all caps for emphasis? https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328085 https://nowcomment.com/documents/377497?scroll_to=3328085 Sun, 07 Jul 2024 13:37:56 -0400