Comments by Isabel Taylor Most recent public comments by Isabel Taylor https://nowcomment.com/users/158838 DAMN..... this kind of made me hate Ankha just a little bit. Especially after reading how hard the flowers were on themselves, like how she wondered what they had done to the foreigners to deserve this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546895 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546895 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:05:13 -0400 you referenced this throughout the story well. In a way that showed the progression of their death. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546894 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546894 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:04:04 -0400 I love how you created this sibling moment even though there's still so much pain happening. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546893 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546893 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:03:31 -0400 this is so big brother of him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546892 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546892 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:02:52 -0400 I love how you're really encouraging your reader to understand this time they spent between life and death. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546891 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546891 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:02:23 -0400 this feels so poetic. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546890 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546890 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:01:15 -0400 THIS DESCRIPTIONN NNNNADKLFJD;SAL i love. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546889 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546889 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:00:55 -0400 I feel like you did such a great job of creating empathy for these flowers that this moment hurttttt https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546888 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546888 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 19:00:05 -0400 I agree with this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546887 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546887 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:59:26 -0400 For some reason the switch in perspective just now clicked for me. I love how you did that, but wonder how it could be refined to create more clarity. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546886 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546886 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:56:24 -0400 I love how you're creating such humanness here with the sibling dynamic https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546885 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546885 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:55:45 -0400 LOVE THIS. I love that you let us think they were human for a bit before telling us they are flowers https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546884 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546884 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:54:37 -0400 Love your descriptions https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546883 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546883 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:53:53 -0400 you are swapping perspectives like mad in this story lol https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546882 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546882 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:53:06 -0400 I love the difference between this peaceful scenic description and the horrific situation outlined above it https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546881 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546881 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:52:28 -0400 'with the exception of one family' feels important https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546880 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546880 Sun, 14 Sep 2025 18:51:56 -0400 Love this introduction! It was very to the point. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546879 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3546879 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 15:17:40 -0400