Comments by Lisa Harrison Most recent public comments by Lisa Harrison https://nowcomment.com/users/159110 Try to find something different here because you just said 'all over again' in the previous sentence. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547603 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547603 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:14:04 -1000 Can the people see anything different about this flower while she is crying? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547602 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547602 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:12:04 -1000 I guess the back and forth between calling people 'foreigners' and refering to the 'woman' is the difference between what the flower sees and when the author is describing? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547601 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547601 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:09:20 -1000 Even though I knew the foreigner was a human, it's interesting that you changed to calling the foreigner 'woman' right before she picked our characters. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547585 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547585 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:06:27 -1000 This is the moment I realized the narrator and Gabriel were flowers! Nice! https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547584 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547584 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:03:55 -1000 Nice dream https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547583 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547583 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:02:31 -1000 Nice imagery here! https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547581 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405911?scroll_to=3547581 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 08:00:53 -1000