Comments by Dan Doernberg Most recent public comments by Dan Doernberg https://nowcomment.com/users/2 I tried to match Jen's but only knew how to select common colors, hopefully you can come closer! https://nowcomment.com/documents/416522?scroll_to=3628699 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416522?scroll_to=3628699 Probably the font size and spacing in relation to adjoining blocks could be improved slightly if easy. Mon, 13 Apr 2026 23:33:38 -0400 can you make the background color the same light green as the others? OK to change the ink color if that would be helpful for legibility or aesthetics. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416522?scroll_to=3628697 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416522?scroll_to=3628697 Mon, 13 Apr 2026 23:28:35 -0400 Jen's original (below) had less text, so I changed the spacing between text blocks and changed font sizes a tiny bit in places (this block down 5 pts I think). https://nowcomment.com/documents/416522?scroll_to=3628695 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416522?scroll_to=3628695 I was trying to keep as close as possible to Jen's design, you should use that or your own judgment rather than anything I did here! Mon, 13 Apr 2026 23:30:16 -0400 Lisa thinks we don't need both this and the Join the Campaign line at top https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624950 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624950 I think we need to explicitly say "You can Help" or similar somewhere... Do people think "Join the Grocery Card Campaign" is grabby enough when it's not a familiar name/term?? Thu, 26 Mar 2026 18:45:59 -0400 1. Lisa things some (all?) font sizes could be bumped a bit. (2) maybe a very light color background other than white? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624949 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624949 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 18:41:44 -0400 I like it Ok, though maybe not as bright colorful as initial... but we may not have had high enough res artwork for original?? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624932 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624932 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 16:19:27 -0400 I have 9:30am phone call to see if they are willing to be on this initial flyer or not. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624931 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624931 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 16:14:12 -0400 Logo should be in batch that was emailed. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624930 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624930 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 16:13:41 -0400 use blue font color!? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624929 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624929 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 16:13:06 -0400 Should read (in smallest clearly legible font): "Purchase $25 grocery gift cards from [Walmart or Food Lion logos] [next line in a smaller font] No dollar value is printed on any card, so we need to have a standard value ($25) to avoid confusion." https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624928 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624928 I kept some explanation but tried to trim it down... better? I think font can be further reduced. Shorter wording maybe: "Cards don't show a dollar value, so we need..." Thu, 26 Mar 2026 18:49:57 -0400 Lisa suggested to explain why there is now heightened food insecurity in that community now. I'm very open to language (and maybe grammar) tweaks! https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624927 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624927 Current text (Lisa thinks too long) is: The current immigration crack-down is making many of our immigrant neighbors food insecure: lost paychecks from loved ones detained or deported, fearful to go shopping, avoiding food aid they’re eligible for. Thu, 26 Mar 2026 18:46:27 -0400 I can read fine, but maybe a lighter red for more contrast? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624926 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624926 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 16:07:20 -0400 font size maybe could be a bit bigger, or maybe just right... which do we want bigger, this or You Can Help below? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624925 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416058?scroll_to=3624925 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 16:06:44 -0400 I think it might be more visually interesting if there was only the one image on the left side!? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624674 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624674 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:28:17 -0400 Do we want organization logos here, or does that add clutter? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624673 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624673 If we don't use a background image that will give the design more space (and more white space between elements) so maybe we could have large enough to be readable logos, but I'm not sure that's good or important here (certainly in general we would use logos, but...) Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:27:18 -0400 Local organizations collaborating on this Grocery Card Campaign: https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624672 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624672 Trying to avoid repeating forms of word "organize", probably there's a better way to say this! Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:45:00 -0400 Do we want this in blue and clickable!? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624671 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624671 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:23:39 -0400 I'm not sure if using a graphic for the numbered steps adds much... I find it maybe minorly distracting but maybe in an easier-to-read font without the two black stars it wouldn't be bad!? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624670 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624670 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:23:01 -0400 Do we want this in a smaller font? https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624669 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624669 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:21:08 -0400 These words will be replaced with the respective logos that spell out the store name as part of that logo. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624668 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624668 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:20:37 -0400 I'm not sure we've started using the other logo for anything else yet. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624667 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624667 Was there any technical problem using the old one, or did you like this one better? Even if we switch to this one (I do kind of like the box of food, and showing big variety, vs. the grocery bag), the stars are a little distracting to me. Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:19:37 -0400 I think having any background image is a little distracting (especially for social media, where people are just scrolling and we want them to understand immediately what we're saying) https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624666 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624666 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:17:07 -0400 I think the black text would be easier to read against a lighter background color. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624665 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624665 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:15:44 -0400 This font with flourishes conveys to me something fancy, celebratory, or from a previous (Victorian?) era... I would use a more straightforward and easier-to-skim/read font for this urgent immediate action needed situation. https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624664 https://nowcomment.com/documents/416055?scroll_to=3624664 Thu, 26 Mar 2026 08:14:49 -0400 “The Grassroots Connector” ran a second article on 1/14/2026 featuring the interviews above: https://grassrootsconnector.substack.com/p/how-the-people-made-it https://nowcomment.com/documents/412877?scroll_to=3604485 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412877?scroll_to=3604485 "Often with protests and activist events we talk about messaging, turnout and media coverage. But what about the impact on the people involved?" Wed, 14 Jan 2026 22:01:35 -0500 Rebecca has generously created an “open gallery” giving us (and you!) free access to, and free use of, all her Jazz Parade shots: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412737?scroll_to=3600104 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412737?scroll_to=3600104 Please be sure to give Rebecca George Photography a photo credit for any photos you use. The gallery is at https://rebeccageorge.sproutstudio.com/gallery/jazz-parade-for-democracy Sun, 21 Dec 2025 18:03:53 -0500 Indivisible Charlottesville also has some excellent volunteer photographers and videographers who take photos at protests and other events and do a great job getting shots for social media. https://nowcomment.com/documents/412737?scroll_to=3600103 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412737?scroll_to=3600103 For the most part, they're using their smart phones, which are just fine for most purposes... but when Rebecca volunteered to shoot it for us, in addition to our regulars, we were thrilled to take her up on it! Sun, 21 Dec 2025 18:05:02 -0500 I did interviews with the co-leaders of both groups: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412734?scroll_to=3600102 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412734?scroll_to=3600102 Wonderground Singers: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412736/twopane Charlottesville Women's Choir: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412745/twopane Sun, 21 Dec 2025 17:46:55 -0500 The interview with Emily explains this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJsYQA6SsVw&t=76s https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3600043 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3600043 Sun, 21 Dec 2025 09:33:20 -0500 Emily had an extensive background for that part, see the interview with her: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJsYQA6SsVw&t=76s https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599947 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599947 Sat, 20 Dec 2025 15:55:28 -0500 Lyrics and music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2WpbssDm8g8 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599946 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599946 Sat, 20 Dec 2025 15:33:22 -0500 Nancy got the lyrics (5th verse) almost 100% right: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599944 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599944 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mY9kmSB84tg "Listen to the tide slowly turning Wash all our heartaches away We're part of the fire that is burning And from the ashes we can build another day." Sat, 20 Dec 2025 15:22:25 -0500 The amusing story behind Emily's Act 3 costume is here: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412741/twopane https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599917 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599917 Sat, 20 Dec 2025 14:59:08 -0500 Emily (and everyone else) showed up in their Act 1 costumes... her Act 3 costume was very different! https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599915 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412840?scroll_to=3599915 Sat, 20 Dec 2025 14:57:14 -0500 Craig Green of Wonderground Singers gives a bit more background about this in his interview: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OmEH6c4UDM8&t=122s https://nowcomment.com/documents/412740?scroll_to=3599774 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412740?scroll_to=3599774 Sat, 20 Dec 2025 09:41:23 -0500 Nancy DeWitt gives more backstory in her interview: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4ZN_IpBvt4&t=1119s https://nowcomment.com/documents/412740?scroll_to=3599756 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412740?scroll_to=3599756 Sat, 20 Dec 2025 09:20:00 -0500 Should this NowComment page be featuring the interviews instead of leading with the Highlights? https://nowcomment.com/documents/412747?scroll_to=3599180 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412747?scroll_to=3599180 I think YES *if* your article includes the video highlights of the 3 acts. Thu, 18 Dec 2025 02:02:05 -0500 Headers (bigger/bolder) would help readers understand what all is on this page. https://nowcomment.com/documents/412747?scroll_to=3599179 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412747?scroll_to=3599179 Complementary techniques: 1. Anchor links at top as a way to communicate what's here 2. Maybe the video players are horizontally laid out (in a table?) so less vertical scrolling is needed. Thu, 18 Dec 2025 01:59:52 -0500 This is largely a DUP of para#13 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412747?scroll_to=3599178 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412747?scroll_to=3599178 Thu, 18 Dec 2025 01:57:45 -0500 Referring to my interview with Sage Bradburn (Lady Liberty) at https://nowcomment.com/documents/412686/twopane at the 12:02 mark: https://nowcomment.com/documents/412689?scroll_to=3599119 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412689?scroll_to=3599119 Sun, 21 Dec 2025 17:35:22 -0500 Sage ran track at Western Albemarle High School; she knows of what she speaks! https://nowcomment.com/documents/412686?scroll_to=3599030 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412686?scroll_to=3599030 Wed, 17 Dec 2025 09:09:16 -0500 Interview with Sage Bradburn, https://youtu.be/vMjAveX3CIw?t=722 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412673?scroll_to=3598797 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412673?scroll_to=3598797 The partnership between Nancy and Isabelle on this project was itself very moving to Sage. Tue, 16 Dec 2025 12:47:42 -0500 This interview is I think in final form (let me know if there are any errors!). https://nowcomment.com/documents/412670?scroll_to=3598781 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412670?scroll_to=3598781 Unlike the first 3 acts, I'm purposely not embedding YouTube media players with the interviews; I want people to go to the respective NowComment pages to also see the photos and transcript and be able to comments. Tue, 16 Dec 2025 11:37:47 -0500 Isabelle and other names will be linked to (shown in blue font color) once the final interviews are online in YouTube and then uploaded onto their own NowComment page. https://nowcomment.com/documents/412670?scroll_to=3598780 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412670?scroll_to=3598780 Tue, 16 Dec 2025 12:01:25 -0500 URL to be substituted, and highlight removed, when online. https://nowcomment.com/documents/412670?scroll_to=3598779 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412670?scroll_to=3598779 Tue, 16 Dec 2025 11:35:08 -0500 Sage ran track at Western Albemarle High School, she is speaking from experience! https://nowcomment.com/documents/412667?scroll_to=3598775 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412667?scroll_to=3598775 Tue, 16 Dec 2025 10:35:30 -0500 Sage ran track at Western Albemarle High School; she speaks from experience! https://nowcomment.com/documents/412634?scroll_to=3598507 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412634?scroll_to=3598507 Mon, 15 Dec 2025 18:44:20 -0500 See Dan's interview with Emily Little, not yet online. https://nowcomment.com/documents/412558?scroll_to=3597876 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412558?scroll_to=3597876 Sat, 13 Dec 2025 23:38:05 -0500 Lyrics and music at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ZKB-ZQTkO8 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412558?scroll_to=3597875 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412558?scroll_to=3597875 Sat, 13 Dec 2025 23:37:11 -0500 Nancy had the lyrics (5th verse) almost completely right. https://nowcomment.com/documents/412558?scroll_to=3597874 https://nowcomment.com/documents/412558?scroll_to=3597874 "Listen to the tide slowly turning Wash all our heartaches away We're part of the fire that is burning From the ashes we can build another day" Lyrics and music at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mY9kmSB84tg Sat, 13 Dec 2025 23:34:26 -0500 is this the locked equipment room with the keybox?? https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559324 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559324 Mon, 13 Oct 2025 19:06:59 -0400 NOT shown on floorplan. https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559309 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559309 Mon, 13 Oct 2025 19:06:06 -0400 way to separate this Public area from other Private areas? https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559308 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559308 Mon, 13 Oct 2025 19:11:49 -0400 any security issues for client access? https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559307 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407759?scroll_to=3559307 Mon, 13 Oct 2025 19:17:51 -0400 maybe have logo graphic? https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556646 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556646 Thu, 25 Sep 2025 17:34:41 -0400 This + next 3 lines are supposed to be flush left... https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556596 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556596 Thu, 25 Sep 2025 15:25:09 -0400 "nonprofits" shorter (and more descriptive overall?) than "organizations" https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556581 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556581 Thu, 25 Sep 2025 15:24:08 -0400 dropped to bottom -- depends if we think having us be the sponsor gets out more people than just the idea of the participatory parade itself wold. https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556580 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556580 My sense is that lots of people would be curious to learn more about parade who don't know us that would come to it because it's us... but who knows. Thu, 25 Sep 2025 15:23:29 -0400 first sentence eliminated, bullets kill off a few connective tissue words, and final paragraph recimbined into closing lines at bottom. https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556579 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556579 Thu, 25 Sep 2025 15:21:18 -0400 Am I the only one who sees "People's" as not helpful messaging? https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556564 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556564 To me that word choice connotes communist/socialist rhetoric from the 1960s/1970s (e.g. People's Republic of China, Chairman Mao) and probably leftwing activism for young folks. So *not* a bad thing in itself, but I see it as an obstacle to reaching many of the "average folks" we're trying to reach and mobilize. Probably the people who are attracted by that phrasing are already on board!? Thu, 25 Sep 2025 15:19:50 -0400 this stays, couldn't think of a fast way to render it in text. https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556561 https://nowcomment.com/documents/407460?scroll_to=3556561 Thu, 25 Sep 2025 15:13:51 -0400 since part of Headline https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547696 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547696 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 16:01:23 -0400 since part of headline https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547695 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547695 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 16:01:07 -0400 add space https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547694 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547694 add space Mon, 15 Sep 2025 15:52:22 -0400 Maybe 8:30 time better right underneath rest of schedule (same font)!? https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547677 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547677 1. someone glancing at schedule won't think last act starts at 8pm. 2. saves vertical space and less "islands" in the ad. Maybe the time doesn't need to be in bigger font than other times, since band name is big and we give them a photo too that's enough of a highlighting!? Mon, 15 Sep 2025 15:39:32 -0400 looks slightly off coming to?of the P. https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547523 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547523 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 12:50:42 -0400 Not sure if it is great (attracts attention) or looks too odd... https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547522 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547522 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 12:49:30 -0400 add space https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547521 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547521 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 12:48:27 -0400 not needed in middle, I had been wondering about using bullets at start of the 2 lines: https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547520 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406334?scroll_to=3547520 Tickets • KIDS FREE 12 & UNDER • 13+ $10 ONLINE OR AT TING ON SATURDAY Mon, 15 Sep 2025 12:48:12 -0400 tighten up a bit!!?? https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547441 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547441 Also wondering if small bullets at start of each of the 2 items would help?? Will leave it to your judgement Mon, 15 Sep 2025 11:19:41 -0400 (Margaritas, Cuba Libres, and Beer!) https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547439 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547439 vertical spacing as looks best. Mon, 15 Sep 2025 11:18:34 -0400 also wording tweak below.. Cville Sabroso 2025 would be the biggest, other two could drop in font size a bit. OK for logo at left to shrink a little if space needed for that. https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547437 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547437 Cville Sabroso 2025 THIS SATURDAY (9/20) 1-10PM, TING PAVILION NOTE-- 2025 can be left out if horizontal space is a problem. Mon, 15 Sep 2025 11:44:59 -0400 change spacing a bit of lines above? https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547434 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547434 Mon, 15 Sep 2025 11:14:20 -0400 Also Balance the spacing (maybe via word sequence below): https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547433 https://nowcomment.com/documents/406322?scroll_to=3547433 Live Music • Kids' Zone • Dancing Fiesta Bar • Artisan Crafts Mon, 15 Sep 2025 11:13:53 -0400 text change (longer length hopefully not a problem): https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3545725 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3545725 Face Painting • Bouncy House • Craft Projects Thu, 11 Sep 2025 14:29:40 -0400 I showed ad to some people and they felt I put too much text at the top, so I'm trying something shorter for week#2. The bottom 2 bulleted lines (can be made into the top 2 lines if you think better) are intended to be bigger and bolder than regular text https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544041 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544041 The 13th annual Cville Sabroso is a combination party (fiesta!) and Latino cultural festival; 9 hours of family-friendly entertainment with something fun for everyone: * LIVE MUSIC * DANCING * ARTISAN CRAFTS * FIESTA BAR * KIDS' ZONE Thu, 11 Sep 2025 14:36:57 -0400 (Margaritas, Cuba Libres, Beer, and more!) https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544038 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544038 Should I keep the "and more", or say "cider", or just drop it? Thu, 11 Sep 2025 14:35:04 -0400 KIDS FREE (12 AND UNDER) https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544037 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544037 Mon, 08 Sep 2025 21:11:43 -0400 AGe 13+ $10 ONLINE OR AT TING ON SATURDAY https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544036 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544036 Mon, 08 Sep 2025 21:10:44 -0400 Remove this line completely https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544035 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544035 Mon, 08 Sep 2025 21:09:48 -0400 Villa Sabrosa had to cancel, Elizabeth Lainez (Mexico) moves up to the 5:20 slot and plays an extended set, so you should just eliminate the 5:20 line completely https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544034 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405825?scroll_to=3544034 Mon, 08 Sep 2025 21:08:06 -0400 fixable? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542101 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542101 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 15:48:53 -0400 matches the Lainez formatting but doesn't match the right column format... just flagging it, not sure which is more important. What you have works OK but my intuition would be to match the column. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542058 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542058 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 11:09:26 -0400 would it be quick to remove this text? I'm guessing NOT, and if so no big problem. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542056 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542056 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 11:04:46 -0400 problem is that it is taking up lots of space and making it hard to feature more important elements. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3542004 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3542004 That screen real estate is really visible/central, better used presenting features that will make people want to come to the event. Our logo doesn't help persuade anyone to come to event!! 😃 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:25:21 -0400 Should we move them apart so not as noticeable that there are 2 (a little confusing) https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542002 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542002 Unless they would want that, to make the point that there are two different stores... Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:19:38 -0400 Do we want/need this? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542001 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542001 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:18:34 -0400 Blue emphasis is good, I think more important to feature Kids Zone than the parade. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542000 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405596?scroll_to=3542000 Meeting on Library steps OK'ed 2 blue bars (short adult in upper left, longer kids in upper right). Here is text for the 2 bars: FIESTA BAR (MAGARITAS / CUBA LIBRES) -- or if space is tight -- FIESTA BAR (ADULTS ONLY) FREE KID'S ZONE 1-6PM: FACE PAINTING, SOCCER, MUSICAL INSTRUMENT "PETTING ZOO", HANDICRAFTS NOTES: 1. parade of flags no longer appears here BUT is still in the list for performances. 2. Face painting is 2 words (as above) Thu, 04 Sep 2025 16:36:52 -0400 @Andrea -- whichever is most popular we can put first... which would you go with? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541994 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541994 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:14:29 -0400 @Andrea -- do we want to say "Free" (maybe in a little burst) and/or "(12 and under"? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541993 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541993 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:07:02 -0400 Logo is not really a key element to get this much space and attention https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541992 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541992 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:25:21 -0400 can move this left a bit (also final line of first paragraph) to avoid widow word at end? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541990 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541990 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 08:54:16 -0400 Maybe a photo goes here instead and text size matches above as better way to highlight them? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541989 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541989 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:08:40 -0400 Could move this to the start of Paragraph #1 of text. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541988 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541988 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 08:51:37 -0400 way to connect!!?? maybe if move Sin Barreras logo? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541987 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541987 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 09:16:58 -0400 delete https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541986 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405595?scroll_to=3541986 Thu, 04 Sep 2025 08:49:37 -0400 a glitchy something? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541512 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541512 Wed, 03 Sep 2025 14:40:08 -0400 WMRA logos (choice!) have been emailed to Maria. https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541511 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541511 Albemarle County logo should be removed (unrelated to anything about WMRA!). Wed, 03 Sep 2025 14:39:22 -0400 I thought part of the reason we were saying that was to communicate "alcohol" which is what a lot of fiesta attendees are looking for!!? https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541507 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541507 Wed, 03 Sep 2025 15:42:50 -0400 tip missing https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541374 https://nowcomment.com/documents/405510?scroll_to=3541374 Wed, 03 Sep 2025 09:33:43 -0400