Comments by Dr. Nicole McCleese Most recent public comments by Dr. Nicole McCleese https://nowcomment.com/users/21622 This topic, new ramadan celebrations, is a great example of the pandemic having an effect on cultural traditions. Like Nikita said, because you' use text/ image, it isn't clear what part your created, and what parts you found. https://nowcomment.com/documents/204936?scroll_to=1905417 https://nowcomment.com/documents/204936?scroll_to=1905417 Example of Grading Criteria The final draft is 4-5 in length. 20 pts The final draft uses either a) voiceover b) text/image or c) supercut 20 pts The video essay has at least one piece of audio-visual information that you recorded/50 pts The vide essay has at least one piece of audio-visual information that you found 50 pts The video essay shows something about the way that other people talk about the pandemic culture you hope to study. 50 pts The final draft has a works cited page/filmography of sources used at the end of the video. 10 pts Total /200 Thu, 04 Jun 2020 14:02:40 -0400 This is an important example of unlearning gender stereotypes. Smart! https://nowcomment.com/documents/203506?scroll_to=1894218 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203506?scroll_to=1894218 It seems like helping your grandfather unlearn sexist ideas about sports is one of the most important parts of the story. I would love to see this idea expanded or worked into the overall thesis. Fri, 22 May 2020 13:58:36 -0400