Comments by Brandi Howell Most recent public comments by Brandi Howell https://nowcomment.com/users/23425 This is telling you point by point because it is saying which is better to them. https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=595514 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=595514 Fri, 14 Oct 2016 15:40:46 -0400 I noticed that one of the essays is explaining what they are talking about more and the other is just giving you facts. https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=595513 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=595513 Tue, 18 Oct 2016 17:26:42 -0400 The climax was when he had to break the glass to get inside his apartment. It was a life or death decision. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574179 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574179 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 11:24:06 -0400 Tom realizes, when he was out on the ledge, that he had been focusing all on work and on nothing that was really important. He let his wife go to the movies alone so he could work on work that did not even have a deadline. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574177 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574177 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 11:18:41 -0400 When Tom stepped out onto the ledge it was no big deal and then once the story started to explain his surroundings and what he was really doing was the climax. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574175 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574175 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 11:11:45 -0400 When he got onto the ledge, all he wanted was to get that paper so he did not have to start over on his project. Now that he is out there and realized what he got himself into, he just wants to be able to return to his house and be safe. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574159 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574159 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 11:05:16 -0400 Time is passing slowly because he is thinking off what could happen. He sees everything that is below him and starts to freak out. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574158 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574158 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 11:00:29 -0400 The new setting is the window ledge and Tom has to walk across it to get his paper back. If Tom fell he would have a ways to fall meaning something bad could happen to him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574156 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574156 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 10:58:57 -0400 Tom was mentally preparing himself to have to start over on all the work that was on that yellow paper. Then he decided that he could just go and get the paper but then laughed at himself and shook the idea out of his head. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574153 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574153 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 10:53:41 -0400 The evidence that the yellow paper is important is in paragraph 17 and 18. Those paragraphs show the importance because he is dreading that the paper is gone. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574151 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574151 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 10:47:25 -0400 Tom is staying home because he has to finish his project. Tom values his work a lot but can't help by getting distracted and then beats himself up for it. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574150 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574150 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 10:41:52 -0400 Tom gets distracted from his work because of the heat and then he remembers he has work from his conscious. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574148 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=574148 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 10:39:06 -0400