Most recent public comments by Gabbi Mendoza https://nowcomment.com/users/23455 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=871379 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=871379 I agree. It's not professional and sounds weird in a formal paper. Fri, 27 Oct 2017 18:48:08 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=871378 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=871378 I thought so as well. It didn't really excite me. Fri, 27 Oct 2017 18:43:50 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867455 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867455 I don't think that you should start paraphrasing the thesis by starting with "In conclusion..." Tue, 24 Oct 2017 19:39:37 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867451 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867451 With the information I am gathering sentence, I believe that the next paragraph is going to be on addiction. Tue, 24 Oct 2017 13:03:16 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867449 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867449 I never thought that the thesis had to be a link sentence for the next paragraph. Tue, 24 Oct 2017 13:01:24 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867447 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87603?scroll_to=867447 I don't think that this sentence should be the beginning. It doesn't really excite me, the reader Sat, 28 Oct 2017 19:12:30 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/81002?scroll_to=809432 https://nowcomment.com/documents/81002?scroll_to=809432 Quoting is very useful when you really like a sentence or a couple of words that another author used for his point. Using this type helps to make your paper more reliable by telling the audience that you did a little research and that you respect them as an author. Wed, 06 Sep 2017 11:40:09 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/81002?scroll_to=809426 https://nowcomment.com/documents/81002?scroll_to=809426 Citing is useful when you have a research paper and you're grabbing important information from all type of sources. Using this type of plagiarism avoidance is useful when citing books, website, magazines and much more. Wed, 06 Sep 2017 11:35:05 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/81002?scroll_to=787627 https://nowcomment.com/documents/81002?scroll_to=787627 I personally find this type of plagiarism when writing an essay or a research paper. When I find a great article and I want to use it in my paper, I most likely would copy it into my paper and leave it like it was and not paraphrase. That is the dangerous thing about plagiarizing. Wed, 08 Aug 2018 18:34:21 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595165 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595165 If you have to much differences then go ahead and write to paragraphs. This could equal a longer essay. Fri, 14 Oct 2016 13:55:22 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595163 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595163 I believe that the similarities should go first, because it wouldn't sound right if the differences were at the beginning. Fri, 14 Oct 2016 13:51:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592121 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592121 I wonder what the authors experience was with camping? Tue, 11 Oct 2016 19:43:50 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592120 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592120 How much more money is it to stay in a trailer park then at a hotel for a certain amount of days. Tue, 11 Oct 2016 19:41:52 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592117 How many bills become laws in a single year? Tue, 11 Oct 2016 19:39:14 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592116 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=592116 How many representatives does Idaho have? Wed, 08 Aug 2018 18:34:20 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591666 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591666 Then the author shares about the positives and negatives of hotel vacations. Over all the author prefers the hotel vacation over camping due to a bad experience. Thu, 13 Oct 2016 16:35:49 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591651 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591651 The author starts out with the positives and negatives of tent camping as a vacation choice. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 00:40:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591648 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591648 Differences are explained in this paragraph. But there are very detailed examples of each difference. Tue, 11 Oct 2016 12:21:37 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591647 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=591647 This is a very good introduction to the subject. It has the subjects that are being compared and contrasted and it shares the make up of the subject. Tue, 11 Oct 2016 12:28:01 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577299 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577299 Tue, 20 Sep 2016 20:55:05 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577297 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577297 Tue, 20 Sep 2016 20:54:04 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577296 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577296 This is what the author brought to the life of hip-hop. Tue, 20 Sep 2016 20:49:57 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577281 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=577281 The author puts the same words("kids who were...") in front of every country to make it stick in your brain better. Tue, 20 Sep 2016 20:30:26 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=563771 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=563771 Citing my own material is a way to avoid plagiarism. Sometimes I write a research paper that I need for another class. I would treat my work like it belonged to any other person, and then I put it in quotation marks and I would cite where it came from. Fri, 02 Sep 2016 16:08:38 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=563749 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=563749 Paraphrase is one way to avoid plagiarism.You paraphrase by taking the evidence that you have found on the internet and putting it into your own words. After paraphrasing, if you have used two words or more from your evidence, then you must put them into quotation marks. Fri, 02 Sep 2016 15:57:51 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=563692 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=563692 A person who uses direct plagiarism is guilty of taking someone else's work and copying word for word and naming it as their own. This could happen when I think that a certain paragraph in an article on the internet was perfect for an assignment. Then I copy/paste it into my work and i do not cite it. That is direct plagiarism. Fri, 02 Sep 2016 15:23:26 -0400