Comments by Morgan Kuhn Most recent public comments by Morgan Kuhn https://nowcomment.com/users/23487 This style of writing is unique because instead of separating the points they are all together in one paragraph. My wonder for this essay is why there is no counterargument. https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=594624 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=594624 Thu, 13 Oct 2016 19:16:54 -0400 Point by point is a unique style because instead of putting all of the points in a paragraph the points are separate. My wonder for this essay is why the style of writing puts differences and similarities together? https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=594622 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61997?scroll_to=594622 Thu, 13 Oct 2016 19:12:07 -0400 I think that the climax was when Tom punched the glass with all of his strength and ended up in his apartment because if he had failed he would have died. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573194 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573194 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 17:24:37 -0400 Tom realizes that he had wasted time focusing on this project and that he should have been spending time with his wife instead. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573193 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573193 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 17:18:26 -0400 The suspense began to build when he realized that there was the possibility that he could die and he began to fear his actions. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573192 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573192 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 17:22:46 -0400 At first Tom was confident that he could just go get the paper and easily get back to his apartment, but he made the mistake of looking down and now is scared to loose his life more than loosing the paper. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573171 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573171 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:46:46 -0400 Time slows as he sees the people moving and the traffic lights turning green. He sees the danger he is in and realized he could die at any moment. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573156 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573156 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:43:15 -0400 The second setting is revealed to be Lexington Avenue which is where he would end up dead if he made one wrong move. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573155 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573155 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:40:31 -0400 By laughing at going out on the ledge to get the paper, Tom convinces himself that if he goes out on the ledge he will not fall and die and everything will be fine. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573154 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573154 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:36:27 -0400 "He ran across the room, grasped the bottom edge of the window, and tugged, staring through the glass." The author may be implying that the yellow paper is the key to Tom's work. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573150 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573150 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:18:09 -0400 Tom is staying home because the date on his work suggests a deadline and that he values work the most. However with his guilty conscious about his wife going out without him may also suggest that he values her. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573143 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573143 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:11:51 -0400 Tom says he is distracted by the heat, but it is actually his guilty conscience. https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573139 https://nowcomment.com/documents/59879?scroll_to=573139 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:06:55 -0400 Ways to avoid plagiarism are to paraphrase and cite work. Paraphrasing requires citation because it might look like mosaic plagiarism. https://nowcomment.com/documents/57212?scroll_to=560036 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57212?scroll_to=560036 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:04:04 -0400 Direct plagiarism is the worst kind of plagiarism because even if someone were to cite it, it still wouldn't be their work. https://nowcomment.com/documents/57212?scroll_to=560035 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57212?scroll_to=560035 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 16:04:04 -0400