Most recent public comments by Langston Geisinger https://nowcomment.com/users/23547 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595905 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595905 How do you get point by point? I really am open to answers since I just don't understand. In point by point it's both subjects per paragraph right? This is one per paragraph. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 10:10:58 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595904 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595904 It's not like you got camping in a city... usually if you do then you go to a hotel, not always about weather. I see how it can be about the price and budget but I think it's more about what you prefer (after you plan a vacation where you actually have both options). Mon, 17 Oct 2016 10:07:30 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595903 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595903 Block... Still only talking about one subject (Hotels) in the paragraph which is block, right? Mon, 17 Oct 2016 10:04:01 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595902 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595902 Ha another thing I should probably not be surprised about and should know (or maybe I do I just don't get it right now) but besides signing bills made into laws, what else does the President do with the House and Senate? Mon, 17 Oct 2016 10:02:35 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595901 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595901 Still seems like point by point since they talk about both subjects in the same point. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 10:00:08 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595899 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595899 Mon, 17 Oct 2016 09:44:12 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595898 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595898 Ha I wonder how bad his experience was if he completely recommends hotels. Usually you don't get soaked because you can tell if it will rain or you stop it from raining on you before you do get soaked. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 09:43:13 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595896 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595896 I'm surprised the Vice President votes only when there is a tie, I probably shouldn't be but I need to learn more about this stuff. And it makes me wonder how many representatives Idaho has then for it's size. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 09:38:10 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595892 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595892 Mon, 17 Oct 2016 20:52:46 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595889 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595889 Again it seems to me like this is a block essay but I'm starting to think I've read something wrong and don't understand the difference. This paragraph focuses on one subject instead of combining both, that is a block type essay. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 09:32:28 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595886 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61998?scroll_to=595886 Hmm unfortunately I'm getting to this late and I see everyone's post so it's affecting what I'm thinking in a way. I don't know if I read something different or if I skipped over some stuff on accident but this seems like a point by point essay. The author compares two subjects in the same point which is (what I thought) point by point. Mon, 17 Oct 2016 09:29:11 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583412 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583412 Agree, this is support for when he says Hip-hop was born from diversity. Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583411 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583411 I think that overall his (sorry, just realizing I'm saying he every time without knowing if the author is male or female) point is that the people at that time didn't know they were setting an example for future generations on trends and things but, the story is called "Before Hip-Hop was Hip-Hop" so this is where the author claims what Hip-Hop came from the diversity of people. This is a second claim on Hip-Hop when the first was one their differences and what they did. Maybe it's the same thing and this could be support? I'm just speculating but my main point was that I noticed this could be a claim also. :p Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583398 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583398 I'm agreeing here since I'm not sure I would have noticed without Gabbi saying it but yes it's rhetorical. He's restating that there were many different kids of different ethnicity. Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583389 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583389 It's rhetorical because he's restating that they didn't know they were starting the trends and the "cultural revolution". Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583385 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583385 I believe that this sentence could be used as support for his claim. He tells us how and what they did that lead to "one of America's most significant cultural revolutions". I know it's before the claim but there aren't any rules against giving evidence before, right? :) Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583377 https://nowcomment.com/documents/61240?scroll_to=583377 I believe the whole paragraph could be considered the claim but he consolidates it into this sentence. He is trying to tell us that kids at the time didn't know they were starting a "cultural revolution" but, his claim is when he actually states that they were at the epicenter of it. Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=555616 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=555616 Two ways to avoid plagiarism are, 1.) Citing the original author of the content you're using and 2.) Referencing the author of your content. The difference between the two is, citing occurs within the body of the writing and referencing occurs at the end of the writing in a dedicated place for credit and footnotes. Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=555597 https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211?scroll_to=555597 An example of Mosaic Plagiarism would be if I were to take what Ms. Malinda Wadholm commented,"stealing is against the law. so someone who..." etc., and I tweaked it to be ''It's against the law to steal. So someone who plagiarizes is basically stealing someone else's idea, even if they are already dead.'' and then did not give her credit for the original idea, but instead left everyone to believe it was my original wording. Mon, 26 Sep 2016 23:44:41 +0530