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      <title>Wonder</title>
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      <description>I wonder how hey missed a space it is kind of funny thewordsarestucktogetherlikethis. Only two words are though. I also think that it is really interesting how far we have advanced.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 29 Oct 2017 18:16:10 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Wonder</title>
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      <description>Cocaine has less cocaine than Crack... What!!!!!!</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 28 Oct 2017 20:18:08 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Wonder</title>
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      <description>I wonder how crack is heat resistant.</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 08 Nov 2017 11:19:52 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Starting a thesis with &quot;While&quot;</title>
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      <description>It depends on your thesis if it matches your theme and thesis then go for it...I think.</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 28 Oct 2017 20:07:39 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Point Essay </title>
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      <description>In a point essay the writer makes points in a alternating way. This makes the essay more engaging to a point.</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 28 Oct 2017 20:04:36 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Block Essay </title>
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      <description>Block essays have blocks of information. For example you put all the similarities in one paragraph. Then you put the differences in a paragraph together. Then you compare the two topics in a paragraph together.   </description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 28 Oct 2017 20:01:04 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Crack is a type of drug.</title>
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      <description>Crack is a different type of drug. Like cocaine is it's own drug. I do not know what it does to you though. Good question</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 28 Oct 2017 19:53:09 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Mosaic plagiarism is a form of plagiarism. In Mosaic plagiarism you take pieces from different places without citing them.</title>
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      <description>Taking just a sentence from a source without citing it is okay.Right? Wrong! Even if all you take is a sentence from five sources then splice them together. That is still wrong because you are stealing other peoples thought.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 31 Aug 2017 17:08:49 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>I think this compare and contrast essay needs a better thesis.</title>
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      <description>It isn't clear what the thesis or point of the article is from the introduction, at least to me. I agree that the sentence should be worded better.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:35:45 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>I do not think it is necessary to state an opinion in a compare and contrast essay. </title>
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      <description>However, you should have a thesis statement that states the main idea. I think a little opinion makes it more interesting to read.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:32:55 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>In point by point, the first paragraph should describe both topics and make a thesis that is about the two topics. </title>
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      <description>This author does not mention camping or hotels in the introduction. I can't find the thesis statement.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:29:14 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>In block point, the introduction should include information for each topic and the thesis statement.</title>
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      <description>This introduction seems to do that.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:26:54 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Are point by point essays usually more opinionated?</title>
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      <description>This one seems to be.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:24:17 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>What element of danger is the author referring to, especially in a campground? </title>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:21:59 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Why did they choose to call the head of Senate a &quot;he&quot; when it could be a &quot;she&quot; in the future?</title>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:19:53 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Why is there only one sentence in the conclusion? Is this normal for block essays?</title>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:16:48 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>The point by point compare and contrast essay is less integrated than block.</title>
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      <description>The introduction is stating what will be written about, followed by separate paragraphs. Each paragraph is one topic. The conclusion states the author's thesis with opinion, and sums up the point.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:12:32 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Block compare and contrast essay is where the information is integrated. </title>
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      <description>In this one, the first part after the introduction is all the differences. Then the similarities are the next part, followed by the conclusion.</description>
      <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2016 14:08:10 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>This sentence shows that people were exploring to find different ways to express themselves using different cultures to make a new one.</title>
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      <description>It was the epicenter of cultural revolution because of all the different cultures represented in one place.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2016 12:05:40 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>This supports that they were at the epicenter of a cultural revolution. </title>
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      <description>Dynamism is changing things and a revolution is changing things as well. The epicenter is that this is the place and the culture is made by the students.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2016 12:01:51 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>A rhetorical device is a way of saying things used by authors to enforce their point to the readers, and draw the reader in.</title>
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      <description>Almost all the sentences start with &quot;we didn't know.&quot; Then the author says it again at the end with &quot;who knew?&quot;</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2016 11:40:22 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>This is the claim because the whole article supports this sentence.</title>
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      <pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2016 11:35:31 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>I will give an example of one type of plagiarism and explain how two types of plagiarism are different.</title>
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      <description>Provides an example of one type of plagiarism

According to Bowdoin College, direct plagiarism is one type of plagiarism.  This is an exact copy of the other author's work.  &#8220;Let's say you found some inspriational words online that you want to include in your esay for class.&#8221; This is a direct plagiarism  from the article cited below.

Explains the difference between two ways to avoid plagiarism

Paraphrase basically means that you do not put more than two words from the article together in a row. When you quote you should do less than forty words.

The difference is that when you paraphrase you just do not copy more than two words.  When you quote, you copy more than two words and put them in quotes. 

From the article:
Plagiarism -What is it and How to Avoid it https://nowcomment.com/documents/57211/combined?embedded=true August 30, 2016</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 02 Sep 2016 21:17:28 -0400</pubDate>
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