Comments by paige rhodes Most recent public comments by paige rhodes https://nowcomment.com/users/24750 I was wondering that too because now when we are reading there are those things that they did not think of that could happen https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705085 https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705085 Thu, 09 Mar 2017 10:44:51 -0500 I agree because you never know in the future things will be MORE advanced https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705070 https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705070 Thu, 09 Mar 2017 10:43:36 -0500 I really like how this short story writes the characters thoughts so its sort of like the character is the narrator. https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705016 https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705016 Thu, 09 Mar 2017 10:37:28 -0500 I really like the word choice in this sentence. It makes it sound more mature. https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705004 https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=705004 Thu, 09 Mar 2017 10:36:07 -0500 I really like how the author uses shapes to describe the characters feelings. https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=704952 https://nowcomment.com/documents/73642?scroll_to=704952 Thu, 09 Mar 2017 09:57:51 -0500