Comments by Ross Youell Most recent public comments by Ross Youell https://nowcomment.com/users/2749 Great ideas, and a wonderful essay. My only overarching critique: is there any literary work other than Goodson that you have latched onto? Any other media outlet? Make sure to be specific when/if you do incorporate more sources. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16847 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16847 Tue, 18 Sep 2012 17:39:18 -0400 I love the idea you make about the fact that the interviewee gets nothing out of it... but isn't he/she getting something out of it with our work? https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16846 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16846 Tue, 18 Sep 2012 17:35:49 -0400 Maybe a new paragraph? https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16845 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16845 Tue, 18 Sep 2012 17:34:31 -0400 Great... I like the idea you portray here of using energy of this past summer and harnessing it into the class. Great transition, Grace! https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16844 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16844 Mon, 27 Dec 2021 20:00:46 -0500 I love this, paragraph, but it seems to come to an abrupt end... I am not saying to write a novel, but maybe ease into the transition of the class and Yeardley Love's death a little more? https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16843 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=16843 Sat, 06 Aug 2022 06:56:49 -0400