Most recent public comments by Ann Gladchuk https://nowcomment.com/users/2755 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=17116 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=17116 Great post :) I really like how specific you were with your examples from the readings, and I feel like you drew a good amount of your personal experience into it. Compared to Ross's paper, yours is a bit less opinionated, which isn't all bad, but perhaps you could include a stronger notion of your take on the class/the event itself. Good job! Tue, 13 Sep 2022 03:05:08 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=17109 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4409?scroll_to=17109 I think it's really great that you talked about your involvement at UVa in this paragraph. It's important to note how involved students are at this school, as well as the variety of extracurriculars we partake in. You should emphasize (maybe state more clearly?) what a big role you had in creating this class in the first place! Tue, 18 Sep 2012 23:36:59 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4406?scroll_to=17104 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4406?scroll_to=17104 I appreciate your take on this class from a newcomer's perspective (newcomer in the first year sense as well as the new material sense), as I share that perspective in many ways. I think this is well written, with a few grammar mistakes here and there, and you could maybe transition from one idea to the next a bit better, just to emphasize the positive and negative tones you take on the different subjects. You seem to have done a lot of work already to get yourself up to speed with the coursework and the subject matter, so kudos :) Tue, 18 Sep 2012 23:28:13 -0400