Most recent public comments by Bhavishya Ramamoorthy https://nowcomment.com/users/2767 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18702 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18702 Maybe try some different transition phrases ("Based on" was used a lot). Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:48:12 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18686 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18686 Don't forget the space "Table 2" Sorry, not trying to be overly critical. Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:45:46 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18672 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18672 There's an extra "iodine," and you need to watch out for commas. They will help your readers follow your sentences. Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:57:51 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18627 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18627 Remember to delete your personal notes when you're done :) Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:54:45 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18603 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18603 It looks pretty though... just not sure if it follows format rules. Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:35:13 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18583 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18583 Be careful about leaving out commas. Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:32:45 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18551 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18551 If we are supposed to write as if someone who has taken this course is reading this, do you need to explain this? Isn't this understood? Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:53:19 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18534 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4543?scroll_to=18534 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:22:55 -0400