Comments by Shelby Lipes Most recent public comments by Shelby Lipes https://nowcomment.com/users/2799 You ended both of your last two sentences with "causing error," so I would definitely suggest rewording at least one of them. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18768 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18768 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:54:57 -0400 This would be ideal. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18758 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18758 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:53:50 -0400 That does sound a bit better. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18752 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18752 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:53:14 -0400 He's right, I think. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18717 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18717 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:49:49 -0400 I agree. Combined sounds more interesting, but reacted is probably preferred in this case. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18712 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18712 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:49:15 -0400 Don't forget to make the numbers you use to refer to structures in an equation bold. https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18706 https://nowcomment.com/documents/4551?scroll_to=18706 Fri, 21 Sep 2012 14:53:53 -0400