Comments by Aly Getty Most recent public comments by Aly Getty https://nowcomment.com/users/32379 This story follows a journey. The train, along with it's passengers, make a journey across the country, passing mountains and train stations. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=968412 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=968412 Wed, 28 Feb 2018 14:39:06 -0500 "The people had packed, and shipped, and sold their things." This is another use of the rule of three. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=968410 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=968410 Wed, 28 Feb 2018 14:34:34 -0500 "clank clank clank" is used throughout the book. This does use the rule of three. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=968408 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=968408 Wed, 28 Feb 2018 14:32:52 -0500 This game is so innocent and it seems all people do anymore is find ways to cause drama. Pointing out teeny tiny "flaws" that do not mean a thing. Saying "your it" is not labeling or hurtful. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964014 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964014 Tue, 06 Mar 2018 14:41:00 -0500 This is so true! The author did a great job with humor and portraying an important issue. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964012 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964012 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:45:58 -0500 I agree with this so much! Anymore, all people want is everyone to win, everyone to get a trophy, no losers. This is not real world and the author makes this clear. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964009 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964009 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:42:29 -0500 This is very humorous. I'm enjoying this story so far. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964008 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964008 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:39:02 -0500 This grabbed my attention immediately! It was humorous but informational. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964006 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=964006 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:32:38 -0500 I did the same thing. I was good at dodging whatever got thrown to me. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964004 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964004 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:30:52 -0500 I can relate to this feeling. You just hope you get someone out while everyone is watching. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964003 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:29:37 -0500 I agree! The students at my school were not super vicious when we played. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964002 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964002 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:28:07 -0500 I agree, it would get very competitive. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964000 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=964000 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:23:37 -0500 I remember playing dodgeball in school, it was one of my favorites. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=963999 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=963999 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:22:48 -0500 I agree, Job staying loyal showed God how faithful he can be https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=963824 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=963824 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 16:06:18 -0500 what is the meaning of escheweth? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=963818 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=963818 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:57:28 -0500 I assume Job is a wealthy man because that it a lot of animals to take care of plus ten children. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=963817 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=963817 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:54:26 -0500 This is sad to read. It's hard to believe how inconsiderate and selfish people are. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963807 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963807 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:29:44 -0500 I wonder if this is foreshadowing? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963805 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963805 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:26:15 -0500 This answers my previous question, "Could he be an angel?" https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963803 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963803 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:22:06 -0500 Could this old man be an angel? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963802 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963802 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:20:43 -0500 The smell of what? The crabs? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963800 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=963800 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 15:17:38 -0500 This sentence gave me chills. It is sad to think how a life was lost so quickly. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935691 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935691 Mon, 29 Jan 2018 12:30:58 -0500 This helps a lot! https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935688 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935688 Mon, 29 Jan 2018 12:29:02 -0500 I like how the author chose to approach this story differently by creating it backwards and starting each event with "Before that," https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935686 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935686 Mon, 29 Jan 2018 12:28:03 -0500 The boy is in such shock and grief that there is nothing for him to say. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935685 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935685 Mon, 29 Jan 2018 12:26:01 -0500 This makes me feel like something bad is gonna happen. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935682 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=935682 Mon, 29 Jan 2018 12:24:18 -0500