Comments by Ella Angelo Most recent public comments by Ella Angelo https://nowcomment.com/users/32884 Great hook https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869940 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869940 Yeah, I agree, sometimes the hook can draw you in in different ways. Thu, 26 Oct 2017 00:43:23 -0400 Point by point wonder https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869939 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869939 Yeah! Not only that, it's almost hard to retain what you are reading because it is what I would call "jumpy" where it jumps around between comparing and contrasting in an almost too seamless way. Thu, 26 Oct 2017 00:40:21 -0400 General wonder https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869937 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869937 I wonder if you pick either form depending on your audience? Thu, 26 Oct 2017 00:37:26 -0400 Point by point notice https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869936 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869936 I think that the block method is a little more black and white and easier to follow than the point by point. The point by point seems much harder to write and even a little hard to read. Thu, 26 Oct 2017 00:31:09 -0400 Block wonder https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869928 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869928 So, the thesis sentence doesn't follow all the thesis material as the ones we learned about yesterday did.Those are all part of the intro paragraph . Does anyone know if the entire paragraph is considered a thesis if it introduces the topic, says purpose, and if the essay will explore both the similarities and the differences or one or the other? Thu, 26 Oct 2017 01:34:06 -0400 Block notice https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869918 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=869918 I noticed that there are three similarities and three differences mentioned here. That is a good tip to store away when researching is finding three similarities and three differences between your topics before you begin to write. Thu, 26 Oct 2017 00:04:11 -0400 My example of direct plagiarism: https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=791361 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=791361 If you were scrolling through your social media and saw someone had posted an inspirational poem.You have a friend who might like to hear it so you copy and paste and send it to her. You don't even tell her you didn't write it. And when she says "wow I did't know you were such a good poet!", you decide to just go with it. This is direct plagiarism. Wed, 30 Aug 2017 00:20:29 -0400 You can avoid plagiarism by citing the information in your paper or making a reference page at the end of your paper. Citing is done among the paragraph with the borrowed information and referencing is done at the end of your paper. https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=791346 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=791346 Wed, 30 Aug 2017 00:10:57 -0400 I don't really understand. So, if you turn in the same paper twice it self plagiarism but if you oringinally wrote it then its not? https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=791337 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=791337 Fri, 01 Sep 2017 18:00:26 -0400