Comments by Jane White Most recent public comments by Jane White https://nowcomment.com/users/33539 This dialogue adds to the story because it tells you the actual conversation they had, not just saying that they had an argument. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119061 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119061 Wed, 03 Oct 2018 19:11:45 -0400 I wonder did they sell the pictures to each other? Their parents maybe? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119060 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119060 Wed, 03 Oct 2018 19:10:07 -0400 This story doesn't seem to have much dialogue, which is fitting because she is telling a personal anecdote about pictures, so dialogue isn't a big part of the story. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119058 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119058 Wed, 03 Oct 2018 19:08:36 -0400 "Photo albums of my mind" https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119056 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1119056 This doesn't make a lot of sense to me. First she says most are in her mind, then she says they are in her shoe box. Wed, 03 Oct 2018 19:07:21 -0400 These are true, but I think when schools are banning dodgeball because it could be physically dangerous. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883758 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883758 Sat, 03 Feb 2018 17:30:35 -0500 This author's humor is making me want to read more. It's drawing me into the story more. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883757 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883757 Fri, 10 Nov 2017 18:33:19 -0500 This author is using humor in a good way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883742 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883742 Fri, 10 Nov 2017 18:32:12 -0500 I think my hypothesis at the beginning of the story is wrong, because it's not a story about a child becoming strong, but it's a story about banning dodgeball. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883741 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883741 Mon, 17 Sep 2018 16:23:25 -0400 I see the use of humor here. I think this is a good use of humor, it's not inappropriate, and it's showing the author's opinion, and it's relevant to the story. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883739 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883739 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 16:30:50 -0500 What!? This is nonfiction so I know it's true, but I can kind of see their reasoning. I can see how it could potentially be dangerous. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883738 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883738 Mon, 05 Feb 2018 15:36:15 -0500 Just by reading this title, I think this story is about someone weak or smaller or less confident breaking through and becoming an athlete. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883737 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=883737 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:45:09 -0500 I wonder who's going to win? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883736 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883736 Fri, 17 Nov 2017 10:58:45 -0500 This is really intense. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883735 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883735 Fri, 10 Nov 2017 18:21:12 -0500 To me, it's kind of amazing that this author makes a game of dodgeball seem so intense, almost war like. Also that s/he can make it go for many paragraphs. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883734 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883734 Mon, 12 Feb 2018 02:31:42 -0500 This story makes this game seem really vicious and intense, even more so than I remember it. However, I also remember being happy or relieved if I didn't get hit with a ball. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883733 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883733 Sat, 24 Feb 2018 11:28:07 -0500 I think this kid sees this game as exciting and a survival game, and at the end of the class he's satisfied because he didn't get hit with a ball. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883732 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883732 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 19:53:37 -0400 This reminds me of middle and elementary school, we played dodgeball a lot. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883731 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=883731 Fri, 10 Nov 2017 18:15:33 -0500 This is a very interesting passage from the Bible. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=879744 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=879744 Tue, 07 Nov 2017 13:36:45 -0500 That's a whole lot on animals. It would be really hard to keep these animals in check. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=879743 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=879743 Wed, 14 Mar 2018 15:31:38 -0400 I wonder why his name is Job. I've never heard that as a name before, only in the Bible. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=879741 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=879741 Mon, 17 Sep 2018 16:23:25 -0400 If he's an angel, why are they treating him so badly. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879740 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879740 Tue, 12 Dec 2017 23:12:20 -0500 I can see how this is magical realism. This story is making having wings and other seemingly magical things happen seem normal. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879737 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879737 Tue, 07 Nov 2017 13:29:06 -0500 I feel that since so many people seem to revere him, they should give him a better place to stay. Keeping him in the chicken coop seems harsh. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879735 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879735 Thu, 30 Nov 2017 12:51:39 -0500 I don't think this man is the devil. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879729 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879729 Fri, 02 Feb 2018 13:43:22 -0500 Why would they club him to death? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879727 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879727 Mon, 17 Sep 2018 16:23:24 -0400 The sea must have been far away, because the sky was dark when the Pelayo came back. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879726 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879726 Fri, 02 Feb 2018 14:57:09 -0500 I wonder why they killed so many crabs. It couldn't have been to eat, because Pelayo had to throw them out in to the sea. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879725 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=879725 Wed, 14 Mar 2018 15:35:46 -0400 I think they all must be really shook up, because a boy died and they had to help find him, which would be a really horrifying experience. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873309 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873309 Mon, 06 Nov 2017 16:40:42 -0500 Infering https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873308 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873308 The boy must have drowned. Wed, 01 Nov 2017 11:42:12 -0400 Infering https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873307 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873307 I think the girl is feeling nauseated because she saw the boy's dead hand bouncing. Mon, 08 Jan 2018 16:54:26 -0500 Directly to the story. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873306 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873306 I think, having read a little more into the story, that the story is going back to front, so the begining of the text is actually the end of the story. Mon, 04 Dec 2017 11:27:18 -0500 Picturing https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873305 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=873305 This makes me think of the beach house that my family rents sometimes, it has a porch and yard facing the ocean. Wed, 08 Nov 2017 11:30:13 -0500