Most recent public comments by Taede Stucki https://nowcomment.com/users/33541 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872474 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872474 I wonder what new technology will come out in the future. I am really excited to see! Mon, 30 Oct 2017 18:17:25 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872473 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872473 This sentence summarizes the differences and similarities of communication now and back then. And is a key part of the essay because it is part of the conclusion and you need a strong conclusion for any story! Mon, 30 Oct 2017 18:15:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872469 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872469 I wonder what it was like back then to know that the info you just received via mail or in person was days,weeks or even months old! Mon, 30 Oct 2017 18:11:54 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872463 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872463 Yeah for sure, I think that was right on target! Mon, 30 Oct 2017 18:05:54 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872461 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872461 I never thought about that. I wonder what it would feel like to do something and have it go super big then regret doing it! Mon, 30 Oct 2017 18:03:31 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872457 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872457 This is unique to the essay because it says that there were mostly two things used to communicate long-distance back then; telephone and mail. And then it says that "By comparison, there are a vast array of communication methods available today." This sentence compares the two types of communication. Mon, 30 Oct 2017 17:57:40 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872444 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872444 I totally agree why would people subject themselves to that.I feel bad for them. Mon, 30 Oct 2017 17:29:44 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872435 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872435 I wonder why cocaine has less pure cocaine then crack. I think that it is funny that cocaine has less pure cocaine then crack( cocaine is the name of the substance!) Mon, 30 Oct 2017 17:27:10 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872426 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872426 It says that these drugs can lead to addiction. That totally is a major point and is very important to this essay. Mon, 30 Oct 2017 17:24:03 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872392 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872392 Great point! I am sure those people that do drugs are grateful for the doctors. Mon, 30 Oct 2017 17:13:19 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872332 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872332 I was wondering is the last sentence in this paragraph the thesis statement. Mon, 30 Oct 2017 16:41:04 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872331 https://nowcomment.com/documents/87602?scroll_to=872331 Sentence 3 in this paragraph talks about what will be compared. In the example above it said that the intro needed to "identify the two things being compared and contrasted." Mon, 30 Oct 2017 16:40:33 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=805183 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=805183 Quoting is when you put quotation marks around something that is not your own. Paraphrasing is when you read a work and then you re-state it in your own words. Tue, 05 Sep 2017 12:10:30 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=805140 https://nowcomment.com/documents/80932?scroll_to=805140 Thu, 07 Sep 2017 17:34:48 -0400