Comments by Olivia McNaughton Most recent public comments by Olivia McNaughton https://nowcomment.com/users/33603 This is another form of humor that the author uses. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909240 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909240 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 17:12:31 -0500 Why would they ban dodgeball in schools? Why don't they just let the kids that don't want to play not play? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909239 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909239 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 17:09:26 -0500 The author did a really good job at including humor in this article. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909238 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909238 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 16:30:50 -0500 This is a good demonstration of humor, but also this grabs the reader's attention so they keep reading. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909236 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909236 Mon, 05 Feb 2018 15:35:43 -0500 I agree, I think the title is supposed to be humorous and I think this article will be as well. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909229 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=909229 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:45:09 -0500 This kid thinks he's at a disadvantage but he keeps dodging, I think he might win. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909226 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909226 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:28:00 -0500 This author makes dodgeball sound like it's fun at all. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909224 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909224 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:24:59 -0500 I agree it doesn't really make sense that the author said the small and timid survive when the big kids use them as shields. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909223 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909223 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:22:05 -0500 This is not always the case because sometime the timid and small people get out first. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909216 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909216 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:14:56 -0500 I don't understand why the author thinks this, just because a person doesn't like sports that doesn't mean they like dodgeball. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909208 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=909208 Fri, 29 Dec 2017 15:02:07 -0500 I understand why they categorize this story as Magical Realism. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908229 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908229 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 17:17:29 -0500 I don't understand why they would club him to death. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908228 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908228 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 17:15:47 -0500 This must be the trigger for this story. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908226 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908226 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 17:00:40 -0500 How would the smell make the baby sick? A https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908225 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908225 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 16:56:03 -0500 Why did they have to kill all the crabs? Why couldn't they throw them back alive? A https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908210 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=908210 Fri, 19 Jan 2018 14:24:55 -0500 I agree, but even with the parts about God and Satan it's not really magic it's more about belief and religion. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=907975 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=907975 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 15:26:59 -0500 I wonder how this guy balanced taking care of 10 kids and all his animals. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=907964 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=907964 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 15:02:08 -0500 Where and what is the land of Uz? A https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=907960 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=907960 Thu, 21 Dec 2017 14:59:13 -0500 The girl wanted to comfort the boy because he had just lost his brother. She went out of her comfort zone to help him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906427 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906427 Tue, 19 Dec 2017 11:21:35 -0500 Watching the boys hand bounce off the stretcher is what made her nauseous. P https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906389 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906389 Tue, 19 Dec 2017 10:15:45 -0500 The boy drowned because he was still in the water when the riptide strengthened. P https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906296 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906296 Mon, 18 Dec 2017 19:31:20 -0500 I agree, I think the boy is so shocked that his brother is dead that he can't find anything to say. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906295 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906295 Mon, 18 Dec 2017 19:27:12 -0500 I wonder if the twelve year old girls are Gary's daughters, or are the his nieces? A https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906294 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=906294 Mon, 18 Dec 2017 19:23:15 -0500