Comments by Chia Chi Hsiao Most recent public comments by Chia Chi Hsiao https://nowcomment.com/users/35993 The story uses a 3-part structure. At the beginning it starts with workers building a train track. The middle of the story is depicting passegers on a train and what they see. At the end is when the boy and his mom are reunited with his father. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1046272 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1046272 Wed, 11 Jul 2018 04:44:18 -0400 When the story uses "easy-easy" and "pushes-pushes," it uses repetition. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1046270 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1046270 Wed, 11 Jul 2018 04:31:16 -0400 The rule of three is used in the story when they say "Clang-clang-clang-clang." https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1046269 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1046269 Wed, 11 Jul 2018 04:24:39 -0400 Thanks for the clarification. I didn't understand at first why fearing God was a good thing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036730 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036730 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:38:10 -0400 Because they thought he was here to take the child away. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036729 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036729 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:34:54 -0400 I agree. In the article "Using Humour in Nonfiction Writing" it advises to not use profanity. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036728 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036728 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:30:12 -0400 I think that the author might be trying to communicate that the school system is trying to over protection kids and in the future it will have a negative effect. If you take competition out of school, how will kids survive in society? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036713 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036713 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:26:45 -0400 I think it's an overuse of satire. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036711 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036711 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:07:21 -0400 I think that the author might being using satire to get the reader's attention. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036710 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036710 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 20:59:51 -0400 Dodgeball isn't neccessarily a game where the strong take out the weak. It can also be a game where you learn to work together as a team and the strong protect the weak. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036709 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78250?scroll_to=1036709 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 20:45:37 -0400 The narrator probably hoped that winning the game would get him noticed by the athletes. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036708 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036708 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 20:33:05 -0400 It seems like athletes have the highest social status in their school; however, being good at dodgball doesn't mean you're an athlete https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036707 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036707 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 20:32:14 -0400 Dodgball is described as only a game and not a real sport https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036706 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036706 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 20:21:38 -0400 It seems like if it was a coed school then the dodgball game wouldn't be so intense if there were girls playing too. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036704 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036704 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 19:59:01 -0400 I think some students care. Maybe they need help but don't know how to ask for it. It's easy to get lost in the public school system. There could be other reasons for them not being able to keep up with their classmates. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036703 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78248?scroll_to=1036703 Wed, 06 Jun 2018 19:53:37 -0400 Job didn't waver even after all this tragedy happened to him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036078 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036078 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:57:46 -0400 Who are the sons of God? Are they angels? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036075 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036075 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:47:28 -0400 Does this mean if you have a lot of animals and a large family you have a higher social status in that time? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036074 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78247?scroll_to=1036074 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:43:23 -0400 Why did she think of him as a annoyance? he didn't do anything to them but actually made them rich. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036071 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036071 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:37:29 -0400 why wasn't she surprised to see the angel fly after all this time? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036070 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036070 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:35:13 -0400 why wasn't she surprised to see the angel fly after all this time? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036069 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036069 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:34:36 -0400 why is it a wise decision to kill the angel? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036067 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036067 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:17:04 -0400 Wht is a ragpicker? And how are they dressed? https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036066 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036066 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:11:56 -0400 The way the author talks about the man's wings, it seems like it's very normal for someone to have wings. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036065 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78245?scroll_to=1036065 Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:09:07 -0400 these girls are twins. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=987003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=987003 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 21:44:10 -0400 Two girls are described as seals so they're probably use to being in the water; however, this experience probably made them afraid of the water. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=987002 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=987002 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 21:43:23 -0400 I think it is a kind of whisky. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=986999 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=986999 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 21:38:08 -0400 This entire story is told backwards. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=986998 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=986998 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 21:35:50 -0400 I wonder if this means he doesn't speak English or if he is in shock. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=986997 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78241?scroll_to=986997 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 21:32:01 -0400