Comments by Evie Yin Most recent public comments by Evie Yin https://nowcomment.com/users/37984 I think all the details help make it more interesting. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=933021 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=933021 Fri, 26 Jan 2018 14:12:16 -0500 I like how the illustrations helped me picture what was happening. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=933017 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=933017 Fri, 26 Jan 2018 14:10:48 -0500 the "clank clank clank" made it seem more realistic. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=932903 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=932903 Fri, 26 Jan 2018 14:09:30 -0500