Comments by Ben Huggins Most recent public comments by Ben Huggins https://nowcomment.com/users/39452 The fact that the author kept the story simple while managing to tell a good story about the train, its passengers, and its journey across the country could make it a particularly fun book for readers of all ages. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=991199 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=991199 Fri, 30 Mar 2018 09:22:49 -0400 The integration of illustrations in that they aren't too extravagant and hard on the eyes, and didn't usually take up more than half of a page was very well done. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=991198 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=991198 Fri, 30 Mar 2018 09:09:38 -0400 The use of onomatopoeia words by the author can really be used to catch the attention of child readers to maintain their interest and get them to continue reading on. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=991197 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=991197 Fri, 30 Mar 2018 09:05:29 -0400