Comments by Camille Jordan Most recent public comments by Camille Jordan https://nowcomment.com/users/39500 Simplicity https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=986745 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=986745 The simplicity of the story makes it perfect for all ages. While describing the train, the passengers and their emotions. The author managed to keep it simple enough to be perfect for all ages. Thu, 22 Mar 2018 17:14:50 -0400 Personification https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=986743 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=986743 The author uses personification a lot throughout the story. Portraying the train as a beast that need to be constantly feed while it hisses out steam. This makes it easy for the reader to imagine themselves there. Thu, 22 Mar 2018 17:10:11 -0400 They told the story of the Locomotive while focusing on the people that interacted with the train. Adding a layer of importance and multiple point of views of the people on board. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=983371 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=983371 Mon, 19 Mar 2018 19:57:52 -0400