Comments by Amelia Greene Most recent public comments by Amelia Greene https://nowcomment.com/users/39581 The narrator uses the pronoun "her" when referring to the train, and in when they speak about the engineer it implies that the train has a personality. Personification galore here! https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=978994 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=978994 Mon, 12 Mar 2018 15:08:22 -0400 The lack of details on the faces is an interesting stylistic choice; it forces the focus from the characters to the concept of the train itself https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=978989 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=978989 Mon, 12 Mar 2018 15:08:22 -0400 The repetition of "Clang clang clang" adds rhythm and a sense of pacing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=978973 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=978973 Mon, 12 Mar 2018 15:08:22 -0400