Most recent public comments by Everlyn Z https://nowcomment.com/users/40067 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1007043 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1007043 The overarching storyline resembles the story itself; there are ups and downs in excitement levels, and there are ups and downs in the different sceneries, landforms, and geologic characteristics. Just as there is a clear beginning, middle, and end to the story, there is a clear beginning, middle, and end when it comes to the train tracks themselves. While there may be twist and turns along the way, there are also a myriad of factors that keep the train, the story, together like glue. Wed, 18 Apr 2018 07:18:52 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1007042 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1007042 Buildup to this point fosters real-life facts (what would lead to the train exploding) with excitement through text and visuals. It continues to maintain the pacing, the imagery, and its drive since the start. Wed, 18 Apr 2018 07:09:20 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1007041 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1007041 Already half way through, the author maintains the story's pace. Although the visual quality is questionable, as the words are blurry... the mood is heavily set by the recorded audio. The text itself, and the imagery it employs (through vivid description, onomatopoeia) breeds and encourages the audience to make their own connections in addition to the illustration. Wed, 18 Apr 2018 07:04:01 -0400